An: My first fict no bashing I'm a kid.

Once there was a pirate ship and on that pirate ship was a rat but not any other rat it was a rat that liked the sunlight and the pirate ship was heading towards a Kingdome the kings name was Frankie the queens name was Shiloh and the princesses name was Shadow. When the ship landed on shore the rat was on a pirate's shoulder the pirates name was Rapheyckalie and the rats name was Scar and Scar smelled the smell of Vegetable soup and ran to the smell but the smell came from inside of the castle and no bugs, animals not even a fly but he did it anyway. When he found the smell and the soup he climbed into the Queens bowl of soup and as the queen took a bite she thought: 'Will I die or will I say it tastes so good? Maybe even say '' Did you add anything?'' What will happen next? She was right she will die the rat had frightened her and she died. The king demanded to have soup the law.