Hi there, im so excited its my first storie! hehe pleas be nice and i know there is grammer mistakes ill fix them later. So please enjoy and be nice.
~Flakys pov~
Flaky was walking along the 'silver lineing' of the cloud she was on. "oh what a beautiful world , I wish that I could be a part off" she was talking to herself about earth. "But I am an angle stuck up here in heaven. Don't get me wrong it's a beautiful place..but... where is the color, the emotion. There is no love other then god himselfs...but I want the love they have down there." she sits on the edge of the cloud with her paws/feet hanging off. Her little ankle bracelets jingling as she kicked her feet. A strong gust of wind blew threw here hair/quills. "I wonder if Father would ever let me go there". "What are you doing Flaky?" she jumped up and turned around to the voice. "oh Father you scared me" she curtsied to man standing in front off her. "pleas Flaky stay away from the edges, you know how dangerous they are" he said with his deep booming voice nicely. "yes sir I'm sorry I just wanted to see the world you made". He gives a chuckle and holds out a hand for her "come child let's get back for dinner". She takes it and they walk back.
~later~
Flaky was walking by the edge again watching the colors of the ground down below. The wind picked up again and she held her white dress down. "Flaky get back over here now, your going to fall!" it was one of the guardian angels that stand watch at the border. She jump as another strong breeze blows and she started to fall backwoods off the cloud. "AHHHH!" she screams as she see people run to her then vanish above the cloud line.
~Flippys pov~
He was walking along the dark streets in the park. It looks beautiful at night so he thought he'd take the short cut through the park. His ears pick up a scream and he looks up in the sky to see something red falling down. He runs to where it fell as fast as he can. "Are you ok?" he looks into the crater made in the ground and notices white feathers around the ground and a big white wing covered in blood sticking out in an odd place. "mmm" the person groaned and stirred lightly. Flippy notices and looks at the body. It was a girl porcupine with red fur and quill like read hair. He blushes at how pretty she looks. He puts his hand out to touch her cheek to see if she's real or an allusion. He touches her warm, soft cheek when she stires opened her eyes slowly. "Fa..ther?" she passes out. He gets up and picks her up carfully, trying not to hurt her. "wings? So she fell from the sky, and has wings?" he thinks as he holds her close and hurries home. "she must be an angle" he concludes "I have to keep her safe".