My first Story Be nice plez


lindsay sits at her computer starting her day at the crime she thought would be a normal danny walkes in there shaired office.

"Hey Montana" she smiles

"Hey Danny" he sits down at his computer.

"somethin' wrong montana?"

"no..yes...Hell I dont know."

"wanna talk 'bout it?"

"not right now,maybe later."

"'SKay" Stella comes running it their office.

"DANNY LINDSAY! mac needs you." danny and lindsay get up and walk into macs office.

"something wrong mac"

"you both need to go to a seen"

"kay"danny and lindsay both say.

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At the seen lindsay is looking for evedence on the body and finds a note.

"hey Dan."

"Yea"

"come here" danny walkes over

"what ya got"

"i dont know" she opens it up and says

' One fine day in the middle of the night

two dead boys got up to fight they stood back to back

to face eachother drue there sowred and shot eachother

the def pelcemen herd the noise came and shot the to dead boys

if you dont belave my story is true ask the blind man he saw it to.'

"wow" they both said


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