HEY! This was the first fan fiction I wrote, about a year ago, and never shared with anyone. It's kind of stupid, sort of, but just wanted to know what you all thought anyway. I was going to post it all together, but why do that when I can break it up! LoL! I have it all written, with the exceptions of a few tweaks I might make editing it, so it'll be very often that it'll update. I think the idea is pretty good, so we'll see. They are teeny tiny chapters, but I thought I'd try a fic like this.
The first chapter is just description, the rest is a lot of dialogue.
Also: Check out my other, on-going fic (which I feel is much better) "Together, Forever, Always." (chapter 10 just posted)
Feedback appreciated!!! I love to know what you guys have to say about my writing, even though I think it's improved since this, let me know what could be better, or what you like about the story. Any ideas could also make me change some stuff around (or make me update sooner!)
Help from an Angel
by Charmed Love
Summary: Piper and Leo have been fighting more than ever in the passing months. Despite all the demons, warlocks, attacks, and death, the girls had faced in the past five years, nothing could compare to the pain Piper was feeling now. With their newborn child, Wyatt, and an angel from the future there to help, can Piper and Leo find the love they used to share? Or will this be the end of their lives as they know it? Takes place last season, season 5, when Piper and Leo were having some marital fighting problems, around Cat House, but before Oh My Goddess (when everything went to crap!)
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, I am no way affiliated with the WB show Charmed, Aaron Spelling, and the cast or crew of the show. All characters are copyright WB's Charmed except the female genie, Nickela, who is mine I guess you could say :- ) If I did own any of it, Piper and Leo would be together...(This applies to all chapters to come).
Chapter 1 – "Can't Stop Crying"
The summer sun shown through the window and reflected an unfamiliar glow off of Piper's face. She was sitting on her bed with her head buried in her hands. Without seeing her face, it was easy to see her cheeks streaming with tears, and her eyes were all puffy and swollen from the constant crying that had come upon her.
The thing that scared her more than anything was the reason for this crying. She was always the most emotional of her three sisters, so crying wasn't anything new to her. This time it was different though. She had cried when she got dumped for the first time, cried at sad movies, cried at the thought of never having a child, and she just barely got through the pain she felt when her eldest sister, Prue, died. But after all that, things turned out okay, or as best they could. She got over Billy Wilson, saw more funny movies, had a beautiful son, and became older sister to an amazing young woman, Paige. But no, this time it seemed there was nothing she could do to make her tears go away. They flowed like a waterfall and hardly ever stopped, only second to screaming. Anyone would think that after fighting for a relationship for five years and having a child with their one true love, they would be happy. Was Piper happy? That thought couldn't have been further from the truth...
It had all started about a month ago when Piper and Leo were out to dinner. Neither can remember what they had argued about that night, but it was big enough to land him a spot on the living room couch. It started out as something silly, stupid, and meaningless, but after building up, it had led to tears.
A few weeks ago, as the pair came running into the house the shouting continued, most likely from a very long ride home from the restaurant...
