Chapter 1:

A/N: Hey guys, so this is my first fanfiction, I appreciate reviews. This may be terrible, but I insist, read the next chapter. I will try to post at least once a week. Enjoy!


Tris POV

It's been quite nerve-wrecking thinking about which job I should choose as a career here in Dauntless. So much pressure has built up in me since I was the first ranked out of all the initiates. Christina thinks she is taking my mind off things by going shopping for the party later at Zeke's place, it's not.

"Tris, you should try this one! It would look AMAZING!" practically blowing my eardrums out of my ears.

"Chris, are you sure, it's pretty and all, but hot pink, really?" I said in monotone, certainly not impressed, "This is the best you could come up with? I thought you were better than that." Teasing her.

"Ughhh! Fine, what do you want in a dress then? Are you trying to impress anyone, maybe a certain instructor?"

"Chris! Be quiet, the last thing I want is for anyone to find out!" I say, my cheeks turning a bright pink.

We take another hour and a half trying on dresses, jewelry, and shoes. Now I think she's taking this long purposely, just get on my nerves.

"Hey Tris, what about this one?" she yells from the other side of the store. It's a beautiful black dress, about mid-thigh length. It had lace trimming around the edges in white.

"I love it!" I probably said it a little too loud, everyone was staring and I started blushing again.

"Ok let's go then!" Christina says squealing with joy.


On our way back to the dormitory, we were talking about hair, make-up, and nails we were going to do for the 'Congratulatory Party' at Zekes.

"Hey Tris, Christina, could I talk to you for a second?" he says, staring at me. "Yeah sure. Hey Chris, I'll be back in a few." I say "Ok but don't make me wait too long, I'm not going to give you all afternoon." Christina says impatiently. "Ok, I won't" I say.

We walk over by the cafeteria, where Zeke, Marlene, Uriah, and Lynn are all talking about the party later tonight. "So what are you thinking of choosing as your career?" he asks, "Because I was thinking you could train transfer initiates with me." He says scratching the back of his neck. "I mean, you don't have to if you-"

"Of course I would love to train initiates with you!" I say. "Ok great, see you later.' He says and gives me a quick kiss on the cheek and catches up with Zeke, talking about the party tonight.

I run back to the dormitory where Chris I standing at the door tapping her invisible watch. "You're late!" she says the minute I open the door. "Sorry, I wasn't being exact when I said 'a few' you know." I say while placing my dress on my bunk. "I know, I'm just joking with you." She says laughing to herself. "Mhmm" I say.

About an hour later we are ready to go pick jobs. I'm feeling flustered and nervous. My stomach is tied into knots. "Tris, we have our make-up, hair, and nails all ready. Once we finish picking careers, we'll come back to get the dresses." She says excitedly.

Tobias/Four POV

I come to the career choosing ceremony and wait in anticipation for this to be over. Eric steps up onto the stage and says his beginning speech he says for every ceremony. I block him out, much too bored to listen to this speech for another year.

"Ok, initiates, first up, Tris Prior, please come up and pick your job(s)."Eric says. Suddenly, I'm paying attention. "I would like to train the transfer initiates with Four." She pauses for a second, while I'm smiling inside.

"Ok one more, that's part-time."

"And I would like to also be a Dauntless-Leader-in-training."

"Ok thank you Ms. Prior" Eric says.

I wait for this to end so I can go congratulate Tris. About half an hour later, all the initiates have finished choosing the careers they would like.

I come behind Tris and kiss her on the cheek, startling her. "Hey, congratulations!"

"Thanks, I'll see you at the party at Zeke's in ten, ok?"

"Ok see you soon." I say wanting to walk back with her, but I know I can't give too much away until later. When we announce that we're together.


I meet her outside Zeke's apartment. She looks…. Stunning.

"Hey, you look amazing" I say." Thanks, you too" she says.

"Shall we?" I say as we hook arms and walk in together.


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