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Harry
I was running to the Dungeon. There was no detention and no private lessons. So why am I down here you ask? Well this is the reason I was angry and this is why...
2 hours ago...
Potions was our last class today with Ron and Hermione. We were sitting in the front row so it is easy for Snape too catch us doing something to deduct points. He walks by us checking over our potions when he did that he gave me a sheet of paper with my name on it. Picking it up I saw that it was my essay I done last week and that...it has..."An F!"
"Quiet Mr. Potter," Snape hissed as he took his seat back in the front.
I look at my essay to see what I done wrong, "You didn't mark any of my work! All you did was give me a fucking F! You even marked comments like it some parts were good!"
"Enough!" Snape barks.
"No! Not until you tell me why you gave me an F!" I heard Malfoy snicker in the back. I turn around to look at him with anger clearly on my face, "Shut up Malfoy! The only reason he gives you good grades-"
Slam! I look over Snape who was bending over my desk. I look at him stunned. Glupping while looking right into his eyes that were only a few feet away from me. 'Now I done it.' Get out," he says.
Didn't think that I heard him right. "Pardon?"
"Get Out!" he barks.
I shrunk in my seat as I look at him. Frozen and just looking at him as he gets more angry. Malfoy was laughing the whole time while Snape was barking at me. I look over Ron who looked stunned at him and then me.
"GET OUT!" Snape yells the third time.
I gulp as I pick up my bag and my essay and ran out of the class room. I went straight to the lake after dropping off my things in the dorm. Sitting on a boulder, catching my breath I though about what just happened. I never seen Snape so angry with me. I never seen Snape being so angry with anyone like that before. I thought he was going to hit me in-front of everyone! I look out at the lake thinking about the incident. I look down at my essay that was marked with an F. 'I don't know what is wrong this?' I thought frustrated I did good on it even Hermione said so when she read over it for me. I look down at the comments Snape left in green, 'Acceptable.' and 'Needs work but good.' He gave me acceptable comments and yet he still gives me an F. I sigh as I look over at the lake in anger he didn't need to give me this stupid F nor he didn't need to yell at me in-front of the entire class. That is when I decided to get revenge if he didn't change my grade. I will go to this greasy git's office tonight and make him pay.
