A/N This is first attempt at Fan fiction so please do not be rude if it sucks.
Chapter one: The Ball
In an old bronze looking structure seeming almost abandoned, was bustling indoors. Inside was the annual First Lovers Ball. At least ten thousand attend the dance every year it occurs. Well tonight was special to a certain someone, Linka Loud. Yes you may think that she is almost a nobody but this is very untrue for her family is known for the most modern of steam works. Things such as the so called Western Star, We'll get into that later. As she stood there admiring the architecture, she didn't even notice that a boy not much older than her opened the door to see if anyone was outside. The boy seemed average, freckled cheeks, brown hair, brown eyes, and a fine red jacket. This was actually Linka's brother Lynn. She didn't notice until he cleared his throat.
Wiping her her head to his direction she was confused and asked "Lynn, what are you doing here?"
"I have a date, same thing with Loki, Loni, Luke, Lane, and Lars."
Looking down in defeat for now she had her night ruined by her brothers, again, Linka walked past him and inside to at least listen to the wonderful music. She slowly walked over to a seating area were her other brothers were located. She sighed and seated herself into a empty seat near the back. The seat in the back were always the softest. She watched as happy couple took to the dance floor as a waltz began. Linka began to bore until she felt the beat pick up. She started to wake her hand slowly to the melody as it soothed her. She began to think she should leave until a you boy reached out his hand and asked
"Shall I have this dance?"
TO BE CONTINUED
A/N I know I'm sorry for cutting this short but this is a test to see if it's good or it completely sucks so please give me tips.