This is my first fanfiction, so please no flames but only constructive criticism. RAR and whatever. (Also, notice what Fallen [Eliksni] say is in italic.)
"Follow," a Baron of the house of Winter screeched. "Yes Captain." The dreg, Venik, was replaced instead of another dreg due to the fact he had just been allowed to become a Vandal. Venik was still fresh to the fact he was a dreg, so he was not reckless like the others. He was given shock blades and nothing else. This Baron he supported, had the least kills as a Baron, but was a Baron nethertheless.
The pack spotted a fairly easy and scrawny looking female human, and made a strategy. Since Venik's Baron was full of self-pride, he said he would fight with her, and if he faltered a little, his pair of Vandals would lay down covering fire, while the dregs hid in the bushes until told to attack. This was executed without question. Only problem was, this one was a good fighter. As soon as she caught sight of the Baron, she pulled out a shotgun and shot the Baron right in the stomach. He staggered, and the Vandals started firing. She hurled herself behind a rock, peeked up, killed a Vandal and went back down. She repeated this until all the Vandals were downed. The baron came back at her, but she just shot him again, and threw a knife in his throat. She stood over his body triumphantly, and Venik too k this opportunity and tried to stab her, but some sixth sense told her there were usually dregs, and she heard Venik behind him. She kicked a shock blade out of his hand, and threw another knife. Luckily Venik was really agile, and had lightning fast reflexes, and ducked. She turned, ran, and downed the rest of the dregs noticing them after she turned. Again she turned around back at Venik and kicked the other shock blade on the ground. He threw a fist at her but she caught it and kicked him in the stomach. She held him by the throat, and threw him on the ground. He held his hands up in surrender. She was did not know the feeling of mercy and aimed her shotgun at his head. A similar figure came out of nowhere and tackled her. "What the hell are you doing?!" The Titan asked with anger. "We could study him, the Vanguard will be happy, plus maybe our ghost senses light in him" she responded sarcastically. "Fine, but I am keeping that shotgun on his head". Venik was confused by their angry chattering in their strange language, but went with her willingly because he was a fallen dreg who followed the rules. The one and only rule he needed to know is follow the strong, leave the weak. He was not weak, he held up a fight much longer than the dead Baron did, and she was strong. But Venik also knew the basics of loyalty like the eliksni did, unlike the fallen. He knew it was earned not demanded. And him being quite smart, presumed the scrawny one was going to kill him and the other human just saved his life, so he screeched at his was to be killer, but got on his knees in front of the other one.
"I actually do sense light in him," Alysha's Ghost said, dubbed Reaver. The titan, Alysha, really did not like the fallen being so aggressive although the hunter, David, did like him acting like he was his leader. "C'mon, let's take you to the Tower". Venik tilted his head in confusion, feeling the ether not coming as it usually does in his lungs. "He does not understand our tongue," David's Ghost, Ragnok, obviously irritated. "He said we will take you to the Tower, the last safe place, and now that you have betrayed your kin, we trust you enough to not throw fists at Guardians just like these in the Tower, but we will still not give you weapons, although I do sense some light off of you." "Alright." " He isn't going to use some god powers and destroy everyone?" David asked sarcastically. "No. Let's get back home."
Hope you liked it, now I know some bits were pretty horrible, so give me pointers please!