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The Box
A 16 year old girl with long brown hair walked down the hallway of Robrock High School. She's cramming for a test in chemistry she has after lunch. Her name is Sakuri. Her best friend, Joy, walked up behind her.
"Nobel gasses, Helium, , Neon, Argon..." she mutters to herself. "Hi!" said Joy, startling Sakuri. Sakuri looked startled and looks around wildly for the speaker and spots Joy. "Oh, hi Joy. Just studying for the chemistry test today." "Are you ready for the new episodes of Yu Yu Hakusho?" Joy asks. "Of course!!! Why wouldn't I be???" Sakuri replied teasingly.
They continued to gossip about what the new Yu Yu Hakusho episodes would be about, but as they approached the lunch line, Sakuri became light headed and dizzy and within three steps, she was passed out cold on the floor.
Sakuri woke up to a hazy light coming in through the window. She sat up and her head started pounding "What time is it?" Sakuri mutters to her self. She turns to see the clock. It's ten till four.
She gets up and goes to the bathroom. On her way back to bed, she spots a box. Sakuri remembers a dream she had last night. She had taken the box to her room and tried to open it. Opening a box really isn't that interesting, but this box was said to be magical. Her parents told her never to open it, but she had no interest in it anyway. She didn't believe in magic, but the dream of opening the box and waking right before she saw what was in it really made her wonder.
"What the heck." she said to herself and picked up the box and took it to her room. Sakuri looked at the clock, five till four. Yu Yu Hakusho came on at four. Sakuri turned on her TV. Sakuri's TV was a very temperamental instrument. She had to spend a couple minuets fiddling with it before it actually came on.
She watched commercials until it came on. The YYH gang was at the Dark Tournament. Hiei and the masked fighter are in Ruka's force field and Kuwabara is a lump on the ground. Kurama is sitting against a wall with a death plant growing out of his arm. Yusuke is in the ring fighting Jin, the wind master.
The screen flashes to Hiei and the Masked Fighter. Ruka just realized that she is really healing Hiei. "Bitch" Sakuri mutters at Ruka. Hiei is her favorite character but the only person that knows is Joy. The show breaks for a commercial. Sakuri's head is still hurting so she takes some Tylenol. When she gets back, the commercial is still going. She sits down and notices the box again.
"I wonder..." Sakuri says"what's inside." She opens the box. It's completly empty. Sakuri sighs and closes it just as the show comes back on.
BAM!!! The TV blows up and shatters across the floor. "Damn. Knew it was gonna blow someday..." Sakuri muttered and started to pick up the glass. As she turns to go back to bed, she sees a dark figure standing by her bed. He's short with black, spiked hair and a cocky, somewhat confused expression.
"What are you doing here???" Sakuri demanded. "Where am I?" The boy replied in a in an expressionless, somewhat familar voice. "Don't play Stupid!!!" Sakuri exclaimes as the boy gives her a death stare. "Who are you?" He asks in a cold tone. "My name is Sakuri. What's yours?" She says in the same cold tone.
Hope you liked it!!! Please review!!!
The Box
A 16 year old girl with long brown hair walked down the hallway of Robrock High School. She's cramming for a test in chemistry she has after lunch. Her name is Sakuri. Her best friend, Joy, walked up behind her.
"Nobel gasses, Helium, , Neon, Argon..." she mutters to herself. "Hi!" said Joy, startling Sakuri. Sakuri looked startled and looks around wildly for the speaker and spots Joy. "Oh, hi Joy. Just studying for the chemistry test today." "Are you ready for the new episodes of Yu Yu Hakusho?" Joy asks. "Of course!!! Why wouldn't I be???" Sakuri replied teasingly.
They continued to gossip about what the new Yu Yu Hakusho episodes would be about, but as they approached the lunch line, Sakuri became light headed and dizzy and within three steps, she was passed out cold on the floor.
Sakuri woke up to a hazy light coming in through the window. She sat up and her head started pounding "What time is it?" Sakuri mutters to her self. She turns to see the clock. It's ten till four.
She gets up and goes to the bathroom. On her way back to bed, she spots a box. Sakuri remembers a dream she had last night. She had taken the box to her room and tried to open it. Opening a box really isn't that interesting, but this box was said to be magical. Her parents told her never to open it, but she had no interest in it anyway. She didn't believe in magic, but the dream of opening the box and waking right before she saw what was in it really made her wonder.
"What the heck." she said to herself and picked up the box and took it to her room. Sakuri looked at the clock, five till four. Yu Yu Hakusho came on at four. Sakuri turned on her TV. Sakuri's TV was a very temperamental instrument. She had to spend a couple minuets fiddling with it before it actually came on.
She watched commercials until it came on. The YYH gang was at the Dark Tournament. Hiei and the masked fighter are in Ruka's force field and Kuwabara is a lump on the ground. Kurama is sitting against a wall with a death plant growing out of his arm. Yusuke is in the ring fighting Jin, the wind master.
The screen flashes to Hiei and the Masked Fighter. Ruka just realized that she is really healing Hiei. "Bitch" Sakuri mutters at Ruka. Hiei is her favorite character but the only person that knows is Joy. The show breaks for a commercial. Sakuri's head is still hurting so she takes some Tylenol. When she gets back, the commercial is still going. She sits down and notices the box again.
"I wonder..." Sakuri says"what's inside." She opens the box. It's completly empty. Sakuri sighs and closes it just as the show comes back on.
BAM!!! The TV blows up and shatters across the floor. "Damn. Knew it was gonna blow someday..." Sakuri muttered and started to pick up the glass. As she turns to go back to bed, she sees a dark figure standing by her bed. He's short with black, spiked hair and a cocky, somewhat confused expression.
"What are you doing here???" Sakuri demanded. "Where am I?" The boy replied in a in an expressionless, somewhat familar voice. "Don't play Stupid!!!" Sakuri exclaimes as the boy gives her a death stare. "Who are you?" He asks in a cold tone. "My name is Sakuri. What's yours?" She says in the same cold tone.
Hope you liked it!!! Please review!!!