Nov 23, 2015

Hey there everypony. I just want to say that I am reediting and rewriting my stories to become a better writer. Since this is my most popular story I will start with this. I hope this will be better than before. XD

Pokemon Equestrian Girls

Ch 1

As the sun began to set over the land we find our favorite group of ponies walking up to the Crystal Empire. Everypony was excited to be back and not worry about any problems or villains. After Twilight became a princess Equestria felt more at peace for the time being. As they made their way to the palace Applejack turned to Twilight.

"Wow! Your very first royal summit. You must be over the moon Twilight." she said

"I am excited but at the same time I'm a little nerves." Twilight explained

Ash chuckled lightly "There is nothing to worry about. The summit is just for the royalty of Equestria so they can get closer to each other since royal life keeps us apart most of the time."

Twilight felt a little better but was still nerves which Ash noticed "If it makes you feel any better I was excited and nerves at my first royal summit."

"You both are nervecited!" cried out Pinkie Pie "You are so excited that you want to explode! But you are also so nerves that you want to curl into a tiny tiny ball all at the same time."

"I feel that way almost every day." muttered Fluttershy

"While I feel much better that my friends are here with..." said Twilight but Rarity rushed up to her and Ash.

"Twlight! Ash! Forgive me dearies but I've just noticed that you two are not wearing your crowns" she described getting in between them and looking at their heads "You havent left them back in Ponyville have you?" in a serious tone

"There in my bag" explained Twilight turning to Spike and Lucario who had her bag in hand.

"Well if I had a crown like that, I wouldn't take it off. Why I sleep in the thing."

Ash and Twilight rolled their eyes. 'Same old Rarity'

Inside the castle trumpet blew as they entered the throne room. Twilight and the others walk slowly up to the throne where Princess Cadence, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna were sitting.

Cadence and Twilight rushed up to each other and did their little chant

"Sunshine, sunshine ladybugs awake. Clap your hoofs and do a little shake!" they giggled

Ash and Luna hugged each other "Well now dear Sister" Ash smiled slyly "Since the sun is still up how about we have a little race." He challenged Luna smirked back

"I never turn down a challenge."

"Me too!" Rainbow Dash asked. The two royals nodded and the three prepared to bolt out but each of them were caught by Celestia' magic.

"It is late and there will be time for that some other time."

"Ahhhhh" the three groaned and pouted immaturely

Celestia walked over to the rest of the group.

"I'm glad that all of you could make it here today and hope you have a pleasant time here." she noticed that everypony was looking rather tired "But we will begin the summit tomorrow. Now all of you to bed." and with that everypony turned and went to their bedrooms.

Later that evening, Twilight was unpacking her back when a knock came from her door.

"Come in"

The door opened to revile Ash wearing a night cap. He walked in and pulled her into a loving embrace. "Just wanted to say good night" she nuzzled him and said 'Good night' when a question flared up in her mind. One she had since they started dating.

"Ash?"

He opened his eyes and looked down at her. "Yes..."

"Have you ever like somepony before?" she asked nervously

"I like a lot of ponies. My sisters, our friends, and I love you if that is what you mean." he said with a cheeky smile

She smiled with a blush "I meant was that in the world you came from did you ever like some one there?"

He tighten his hold on her. He was silent for a moment "When I was a twelve, my mother believed that needed to find someone to fall in love with. At first I was against it, I just said goodbye to my only friend Misty and I didn't want to feel that pain. After my mother died, I made a promise that I would find a woman to love and protect. For years I was courted by many women, but I never connected with them. Many had good talks and debates about their kingdoms and their views on life in their citizens. Other couldn't even see past the crown they wear and could care less about the world around them. But nothing went beyond just conversation."

"Why is that?"

She looked up at him and he gazed back at her. Then he whispered in her ear "You could say... I was waiting for you"

He looked back into her eyes with a gentle smile which she returned. Slowly they lend in for a sweet kiss with inches apart.

"Will you two get a room!"

They turned to see Spike leaning net to the bed. "Sheesh! You two really are the most lovey dovey pair I have ever seen."

They blushed hard and ended the hug there. Ash bowed to Twilight and left the room.

"Five more seconds Spike. You couldn't have given me Five More Firkin SECONDS." she snapped in frustration and climbed into bed as Spike surged and climbed into his own bed.

Ash left Twilight' room a also frustrated with the purple dragon. He turned the corner and saw Lucario waiting from him in the hallway. Ash frowned at his old friend and walked past him by without a word.

"Well, that went swimmingly" he chuckled

"Lousy dragon" Ash grumbled as the two headed to their room.

As the night slowly dragged on, the guards maintain their duty and patrolled the hallways. When a cloaked pony sneaked out of the shadows. It sneaked past one guard after another until it arrived at it's destination. Using magic it open the lock and quietly made it's way to Twilight's bed. It took out a red and white ball and tossed it. It open and a little pink cat materialized.

"Espeon keep watch on the door." the intruder said in a hushed voice.

Espeon nodded and walked over to the door. The intruder carefully switched Twilight's crown with a fake but modest one. "Ok now return" she pointed the ball back at the pink cat and it vanished in a red light into the ball. She turned to leave but tripped over Spike's tail. The sound awoke Twilight, she open her eyes and saw the intruder retreating with her crown.

"Wait! Stop!" she yelled out

The Intruder rushed away; but the sound of Twilight awaken everypony.

"She stole my crown!" Twilight answered their unsaid question and everypony chased after her.

Twilight tried to get in front of her but couldn't. The intruder faked a turn around and watched as the ponies race around the corner. Sighing in relief and the intruder took off in another direction. But as they turned into another hallway the intruder came face to face with Ash. "I have to admit. You are very gutsy to try and pull this off. And for that you have my respect" Ash readied hi magic for the catch "but I will have to stop you now"

The intruder backed up a little by the alicorn in front of her, but released the strange pink cat and called out "Espeon use confusion!"

The cat' eyes glowed red as it's attack filled Ash' mind. Ash felt the attack worm it way in his mind. Then his vision went black completely losing them. "Ahh Damn it!" he was so unprepared that he stumbled next to the wall allowing the intruder to escape.

The intruder smirk at the fallen prince and returned the cat, but an aura sphere landed in front of her forcing her to stop in her tracks.

'Stop! Or else.' Lucario readying another aura sphere

"A Lucario!?" gasped the intruder ready to turn around but Twilight and her friend finally caught up with her. She looked back at Lucario and found that the prince had recovered from the confusion attack. At first she felt trap but realized that she was already where she needed to be. She turned and went for the door behind her. Twilight made one final jump and tackled the intruder as they fell into the room. The crown flew out and bounced of the walls and into a large mirror, but instead of hitting the mirror it went into it.

"Gasped"

"What have you done to my crown?" questioned Twilight. The Intruder had now lost her hood and reviled herself to be a yellow unicorn with yellow and red hair. She smiled wickedly "Sorry Princess" she teleported to the mirror "But I gotta run." and with that she jumped into the mirror.

"Okay what was that?!" lashed out Rainbow Dash but unknown to them Lucario spoke to Ash telepathically 'Master. The intruder..'

'What about her?' Ash thought still mad that she got away.

'She knew my name.. She knows what I am..' Lucario said sternly

Ash frozed he turned to his friend back at the mirror. "That's impossible.." he muttered out load.

The next morning the Princesses the main seven were in the room with the mirror talking over what had happened last night.

"The intruder last night was Sunset Shimmer." explained Celestia "She once was my student before Twilight. Although she had great talent in magic she did not have the understanding of friendship and it's power. She wanted to advance her studies but I refused until she understood friendship. Sunset Shimmer tried to advance on her own with out my instructions and refused understand friendship. So I had to end her time as my student."

Celestia turned to the mirror "This mirror as designed by Starswirl the bearded many years ago. It was fused with magic to travel to other dimensions and worlds. Sunset used this mirror to travel to a world with out magic."

"Celestia" inquired Ash stepping up to his sisters

"What is it Ash?" she asked noticing the look of caution but with a side of hope.

"Sunset recognized Lucario. And she had a creature that had similar powers as him. It's possible that the world she been living in may actually be the world we came from."

Everypony was shocked at this, they all knew that he came from another world but the idea that there was a way for him to go back unsettled everyone especially Twilight.

"I believe so" Celestia nodded in the back of her mind she was silently hoping that it was not. "but I don't know if you'll go back to the exact time, you have been here over a year."

Ash smiled and looked at his sisters "I just want to know."

Luna took change and spoke "The mirror only opens once every 30 moons so it will only stay open for another three days when the moon hits midnight on the third day it will be closed and if Sunset Shimmer took the element of magic to a world without magic; the creatures of that world would be in grave danger."

Applejack spoke up "If Twilight's going we will come with." As the rest of the mane seven stood by her side. Twilight felt the heart warming spreading throughout her being. But Celestia shook her head "If there is more magic in their world it could cause more harm than good."

"I will be going with Twilight" said Ash sternly "if this is my world and I should be there to help guide and direct Twilight when she needs and besides I really like to have this opportunity to see my homeland again."

Celestia sighed "Alright then you can go" but she and the others weren't so keen on letting go. He may want to stay there. But that was nonsense so they said their goodbyes.

"You to will be home before you know just be safe" as the team watch them go. First Twilight steps to the mirror then followed by Ash; Spike who was behind the group started to panic and bolted after them. Lucario seeing this as well jump after him trying to stop him but both the dragon and Lucario went through the mirror before anyone could stop them.

And so it adventure begins

So This felt like a better intro than before. Please you thought and opinions in the review box or send me a message see you soon.