Author's note: Hey guys this is my first story so please no flames.


I don't own anything.


Mario, Link, Kirby, and Pit were on stage fighting like usual. Pit won the fight but some monsters appeared. most of the monsters were slow but were very dangerous. soon Mario, Link, Kirby, and Pit started fighting the monsters. Everyone kept fighting but none of the monsters felt a thing. Pit started to get angry as the monsters try and kill everyone.
"Why wont the any of the monsters die?"
Pit soon started to get tired of fighting of the monsters.
"how can these monsters not feel anything"
Mario continued fighting with these and found out that fighting isn't doing anything
"I don't think a fighting is doing any good."
Soon everyone stops fighting and runs away. The monsters started walking slowly where everyone ran away.
"What are those monsters?" Pit said nervously.
"I don't a know. "
"What do they want."
"How did they get a here"
"That's the same question i was gonna ask."
"I a found a place to a hide."
"Where is it?"
"Its a under here."
"This is supposed to be a hiding place?"
"Where else do we a got there's nothing else to hide."
"So this broken tree branch and this small forest is gonna help?"
"And if we a dig up the ground we could a hide."
"Well, I guess that will do, for now."
Everyone digs up the ground and starts hiding it with a broken tree branch. Shortly someone came walking by the forest and found a tree branch. It was Samus in her zero suit
"Um, what are you guys doing under there?"
"They're everywhere." Link shouted.
"What are everywhere?"
"Monsters"
"Monsters?"
"Yes..."
"There are none here."
"There's none."
"None."
"Ok then"
Mario, Link, Kirby, and Pit went up and started walking through the forest. Soon a shadow appeared and took Kirby.
"Kirby!" Pit shouted
"Go on... without me"
"No..."
"Its too late..." Mario said very softly
"No it's not!"
Everyone started looking for Kirby but then Kirby was never found.
"Who did this?" Pit shouted.
"WHOA!" Mario screamed
"What is it?"
"I a just saw a shadow"
"is it the monster?"
"I a think."
"Quick... Run for your lives!"
"What the heck is that? Whatever it is I'm fighting it." Samus yelled.
"Wait you can't." Link said.
"Why not?"
"Because they don't die."
"They have to die at one point."
"We tried fighting and they just won't die," Pit said exhaustedly.
"Just run away." Link said.
Soon everyone ran away from the monsters and tried to hide at another place. Later, Everyone fell asleep next to a swamp where they thought they would be safe.


So guys, what do you think of the first chapter so far? Please review and no flames please. Sorry if i had some spelling errors.