This is how Peter dies

He does not die in blood, or honor

He dies with a cry

He lives and dies mostly in a place

Where he is not needed

But it could have been prevented

Aslan could have seen his eyes

So desolate and lost

His smile is charming as is his jokes funny

All so no one would guess

That Peter dies a little by little

As he never sees home again

So when he finally dies

as the train rolls over him and Edmund

It is a release

The first poem I have ever written. I thought I would give it a go. Tell me what you think :)