I dont own naruto or anything from it except few of the charactors in this story which i have made
this is my first story...
tell me what you think..... continue or just stop?
It was late when Saku walked out of the forest from his secret training with Celestica, Katsushiro, and Kansto. Saku was fuming about why his dad did not want him to train; even though it would be a half of a year before he could officially start training.
Saku thought to himself –I understand why the others are able to train before they start…. It is because of their Kekkei Genkais I bet. Hmm…. From the stories, I heard my dad tell I should possibly have almost three of them….two from his side and the Byakugan from my mother at least…- . Then suddenly he heard a childish laugh out of nowhere. He spun around to see where it came from and face planted on a tree, and fell knocked out. – Ooopps I did not mean to scare him….hmmm I think he should know about me now...-
Saku heard a quick rushing sound that made him dizzy. Whilst all this happened, He felt a calming powerful chakra flowing into him. He found himself laying in a vast field with flowers and a pond and a window next him. Moreover, what he saw was the tree he hit his head on. "Wow", he said to himself "Where am I…. and why is this thing here? I can see the tree… and there is someone walking this way in the distance". Then he heard a noise behind him so he turned around and there stood a woman with a few cat features. He took in what she looked like, she was average size for a teen girl, and she had hair down to her waist. He took her in so fast that he almost did not see cat ears and a tail. The main thing he noticed was that she was Pale and that she was beautiful.
She was almost a replica of Katsushiro but with longer hair plus the obvious cat tail and ears. "W-w-w-who are you?" Saku stuttered, his eyes still looking at her. "Me? I don't have a name yet." She said, but you may call me Neko for now." There was a long pause. "Ok then N-n-neko. W-w-w-where a-are we?" he asked, while turning to look through the window thing again to see that the person that was coming this way was getting closer. "Well", she said, "I don't know exactly what we would call it but how about your Mind-scape…" she turned to the pond and stuck her toes in. She flinched softly at the cold water. "Hmmm this will not do" and as she said it Saku saw chakra flowing into the water warming it up. "I heard that phrase before somewhere….and if I'm going to guess this your saying we are in my mind????" He said while walking up next to her. "Yes. We are." Neko spoke at last while easing herself into the pond that seemed to become a hot spring "Ahhh…just perfect. Why don't you join me?" Saku thought about it and turned to look through the window again. This time the person was close enough to guess who it was. It was Katsushiro. He saw her face when she could see him lying unconscious on the ground. He turned back to Neko and said "Maybe next time. Ok? Nevertheless, how do I leave here anyway? Kat is coming…." Neko got a gleam in her eyes when he said Kats name. "Oh it's very simple. All you have to do is will it. You do know that Kat likes you too." She said quickly. There was a small silence. Saku finally said, "How do you know?" while pacing. "Oh it's very easy to tell… next time you train just watch her out of the corner of your eye better." So he waved bye to Neko and opened his eyes to see Kat right above him with a worried look on her face. They stared at each other for what seemed like forever. Then Katsushiro finally broke the silence, "Are you ok Saku-kun?" she asked. "Um uh yea I am Kat. Thanks." He said as he smiled at her.