Ignorance is Bliss
My wannabe poem entry for the Blue Bloods contest, and also my first English poem ever, as well as my first Blue Bloods poem. I've got no idea if this is even close to decent, so please tell me what you think (I could use some critique). This is basically about Bliss, and 'the visitor' Lucifer hidden inside of her. Set a little after Blue Bloods, when Bliss still has no idea of what's really going on.
In this world, there are things unseen.
Good covers the evil and a
New spirit hides the ancient one, hidden in
One girl, with emerald eyes and
Red hair, both a student and a model.
Azazel, the name given to her, so
No one sees, not even her, how she is
Corrupted, and lied to by family.
Even so, she lives in Bliss
In the darkness, a voice calls out, to her
So a dark power can conquer the light.
Blacked out and confused, as her father,
Lucifer, destroys the ones she loves
In her body, under his control, she's unable to
Stop him, making her a
Silver Blood named Ignorance
So? Crappy? Terrible? Decent? PLEASE LET ME KNOW! I'm begging for reviews here!