OK, this is being rewritten because I don't like how short the chapter were and how they weren't very descriptive. So I hope you guys like this version better.

Edward and Co. are still like themselves (I hope) in Twilight, Bella is the only one OOC. She's a bit crazier and a bit of a wild child, even though it might not seem like it in this chapter.

So I Thought Chapter 1

"Bella baby, you don't have to go." My mother, Renee, told me.

"Mom, Renee, I have to go. You've always wanted to go on the road with Phil. Now's your chance. Plus, I don't want to hear you and Phil going at it." I was going to live with Charlie. My bags were already packed and sitting in the trunk of my car. I really did wanna go. I didn't want to hear Renee and Phil doing the bump whenever he'd come home. But I did want her to travel with him, and not be unhappy at home with me.

My mom blushed at my use of words. She should be used to it by now, I admit it, I am a bit brash. "Okay, baby, if this is what you really want."

I rolled my eyes. I gave Renee a one-armed hug and told her to pass it on to Phil. I got into my Chevy and started my 25-hour journey to my personal hell, Forks, Washington.

Let me tell you about Forks. It was located in the Olympic Peninsula of Northwest Washington. It rains on this insignificant town more than any other place in the U.S. Renee escaped from Forks when I was just a few months old and now I'm going back because… Well, I really don't know why I'm going back. Charlie is the Chief of Police in Forks. So I really can cause as much hell and friction as I want 'cause I have an inside cop! And as kooky and crazy as it sounds, I feel like something big is going to happen.

After 24 boring hours, I finally made it to Forks. It was as green as ever. I know there's not anything remotely interesting to do in this hick town. I cautiously pulled up to the small 2-story house I know call home. The police cruiser was in the driveway so I knew Charlie was waiting for me; there was also an unknown truck. I turned off my car and sighed heavily. I got out of the car and headed to the front door, it opened before I even knocked. There was Charlie, medium brown hair and chocolate brown eyes.

"Sup, Charlie." He pulled me into an unexpected hug, which I returned, awkwardly. Charlie practically dragged me into the house and into the living room. There sat 2 people; I immediately recognized Billy in the wheelchair, Charlie's best friend, but I couldn't identify the tall drink of coffee sitting next to him. He was built like a skyscraper, tall and sturdy. He had the most deepest set of black eyes. I could see the sparkle of playfulness in his eyes. Don't get me started on the hair! It was black like his eyes, and was cropped low. Charlie cleared his throat.

"Bella, you remember Billy and Jacob." Jacob! That was Jacob. Jake was a tiny little boy I had made mud pies with when I was little. He was supposed lanky and awkward, not sexy and confident! I quickly composed myself. "Hey, I'm Bella." I simply stated. I gave Billy and Jacob a handshake. But Jacob held on for a little too long.

"Oh, Bells, I forgot your bags. Me and Jake will go bring 'em in." I tried to tell them I could handle it with no problem. I guess Renee didn't tell Charlie about me being a demigod.

A demigod is usually the love child of a mortal and a god. Now you might ask how that's possible because my parents are both mortal. Well, Renee was not always faithful to Charlie. She was running around town, looking for some fun, when she ran into Ares, my father. One thing led to another and I was conceived! Charlie knew Greek gods were real and he knew Renee cheated on him with Ares. I guess he didn't know that I inherited some power from Ares. That's why I stopped coming to Forks after I was 12. I had just discovered the truth about my family.

Hey! Where was everybody? I realized I was in living room alone. I walked outside and say Billy, Jacob, and Charlie all gaping at my car. I admit it was a beaut. A 1969 Chevy Camaro Z28. It was candy apple red with 20 inch wheels. It was fully restored and it had up-to-date everything. From a brand new engine to a 5-disc CD player to an iPod port.

"What happened to you guys getting my shit?" They still stood there like lifeless mannequins. I sighed heavily and made my way over to my truck. I grabbed my suitcases and headed back into the house.

After the bozos stopped drooling at my car and after Billy warned me to be careful of who to trust, the Blacks left, Charlie showed around the house. There was three bedrooms, one each for me and Charlie and a recreation room; two bathroom; and all the other regular stuff in a house. Charlie also enrolled me as a junior into Forks High School, home of the Spartans. What a suckish team name. I started school tomorrow, what a joy that would be. It's not that I hated school; it was all the attention I would get for being the new shiny toy. Also, I tend to scream danger and caution. Maybe it was because I was different or maybe it was because I was the daughter of the Ares. I'm really not sure.

Anyway, my room was awesome! The room itself was an apple green and I had one of those beds that had the shelves behind it. The shelves and the headboard were white, the sheets were black with white polka dots and the duvet was white with black flowers and the quilt was white. The room is so me and I can't even describe how great it is. I grabbed my guitar from the corner of my room and strummed the beginning chords to "Take Me Away.'

Get up. Get out.
Move on, move on.
There's no doubt.
I'm all wrong, no right.
It's all the same to you.
I'm too thin, too fat.
You ask why, so why, so why, so why?

I was quickly getting bored of singing so I put my guitar back in its corner and flopped down on my bed. I was almost sure I would get a visit from one of the family whether it was Poseidon or my own pop, Ares. But I needn't worry about that now. I have to go to school tomorrow. Oh joy. I pulled back my covers and sank down into the soft matteress. I wonder what Billy meant by being careful about who I could trust. I sighed, it really didn't matter, I don't trust easily anyway.

After a while, my eyelids started to get heavy and soon I drifted off into a dreamless state.

OK, I hope my supporters like this version better. I know the plot is pretty played-out but I'll try to make it as interesting as possible. Links on profile! Reviews and CONSTRUCTIVE critiques are welcome!

Songs Used:

Take Me Away - Pink Slip