I don't own Danny Phantom. Duh. But whatever. Here is my first ever fanfic. I have changed it some. Okay a lot. Hope you like the newish one. Oh and they are 15 turning 16. Jazz is 17. Her birthday wont be in the fic.

Danny Fenton walked with his two best buddies toward Casper High.

"So how was the last few weeks of summer with out me?" Danny turned to his pals Sam Manson and Tucker Foley, aka Tuck.

"I am happy to report no. It was surprisingly quiet. Well unless you count the Box Ghost." Sam smiled.

"Yeah. Only the Box Ghost but that was easy." Tucker agreed.

"Good. I couldn't imagine my life with our you guys." Danny was looking at Sam when he said this. The two blushed in unison at this remark. Tucker smiled. His best friends have been crushing on each other scene that first dance their freshman year. Now they were sophomores and still no one has said anything about it. Tucker was going to make things happen this year.

The three came into viewing distance of the school and what they saw they didn't like. The top floor of the school was on fire! Hovering just above it was a ghost.

The three ran as fast they could to reach the school and find out want was going on. The whole student body was outside along with the teachers.

"Mr. Lancer what happened?" Asked a panicked Sam as she came up behind him.

"That! That students is what happened!" He pointed up at the ghost.

She looked possessed. Her skin was an orangish color. Her hair was long like Paulina's but instead of black it looked like fire. Wrapped around her body was a scarf like cloth. It went around her waist and over her chest. But what Danny thought was odd was that she wore no shoes.

"So she set the school on fire?" Tucker asked. "But why?"

"I don't know. But I'm gonna find out!" Danny ran into the nearest alley and changed into his alter ego Danny Phantom. He came flying out of the alley and up to confront the ghost.

Sweat poured down her face as the fire licked the sides of her face not burning her. Her orange eyes darted from place to place. The more she fought the stronger the hold on her became. Soon she wont be able to fight him off any more and will have no life any more.

A noise came from behind her. She turned around to be rammed into by another ghost. His white hair flapped in her face as he flew to the next building landing on the ceiling. He dropped her but he stayed air born.

"Who are you and what do you want?!" He asked fury easily seen.

"I am losing control." She responded shaking uncontrollably.

"What?" The boy landed on the ceiling a safe distance away from her.

"I c-can't talk like th-this. I n-need to g-go." She shook violently as the tried to kick off the ground. "Let me go." She whispered squeezing her eyes shut. "Let me go. I did as you asked. Now let me leave." Danny heard some of this.

"Who are you talking to?" He raise an eyebrow. "Are you okay?" Danny looked into the girl's orange eyes full of pain and agony. The girl fell back to the ground clearly trying to fight off whatever she was talking to. Then she stopped shaking and looked up surprised.

"I'm free? He let me go?" Slowly she stood up and looked at Danny. "I, ah."

"Why did you set the school on fire?!" Danny yelled pointing to the school that was now being put out by the fire department.

"I didn't! He made me! I didn't want to. He wants to kill you!" She waved her arms in the air.

"Who is he?" Danny crossed his arms. The girl opened her mouth but the shaking started again.

"I wont tell him," she whispered, "I promise. Just let me go. Please." A tear left her eye and streamed down her face. Danny saw this a frowned. Why would a "bad" guy be crying? The shaking stopped again. A sigh of relief came from the girl.

"I have to go." She got up off the ground having fallen once the shaking started up again and flew off the roof of the building. Danny wanted to flow her to see were she went but for some reason he didn't think her wanted to know. Her shaking and talking herself made him nervous. So he flew back down to the alley and changed back to normal. His friends greeted him when her came out.

"So who was that?" Sam asked.

"I don't know but she really creped me out. She shook uncontrollably and she talked to herself." Danny look at Sam's face. He could tell she was worried.

"I'm alright Sam." Danny reassured her.

"What makes you say that?" She asked.

"You look really worried."

"Well you would too if you best friend fights ghost every day. Yeah it is really cool, but sometimes they are more then you can handle. And seeing how we don't know who this is, I was worried if she was going to be too strong for you." Sam looked at her feet as she admitted her feelings.

"All students will have to return to their homes until further notice." Principal Ishiyama spoke through a blow horn. The trio turned on their heels and started for Danny's house.

Danny flung himself on his bed while Sam and Tucker plopped down in his beanbag chairs.

"So did she say anything?" Tucker asked.

"Yeah, she said something about losing control, not being able to talk like this. And when I asked her why did she set the school on fire she said 'I didn't! He made me! I didn't want to. He wants to kill you!'. Danny mimicked what she had said to him waving his arms the way she did.

"Who is he?" Sam asked.

"I don't know. When I asked her she started shaking again and talked to herself."

"What did she say?" Jazz came bonding into Danny's room ready to give an explanation as to why this girl was talking to herself.

"Jazz, were you listening to us?" Danny jumped off his bed to face his sister.

"Of course I was. I am part of your team Danny and it is about time that you start to realize that." Jazz put her hands on her hips.

"Errrrrrahhhhhhh!" Danny screamed in frustration going back to his bed.

"So what did she say?" Tucker asked returning his attention back to Danny. She said something about not telling me and asking to be let go."

"Hmmm." Jazz tapped her finger on her lip as she thought. "I would have to say she is hearing voices in her head. She is probably doing what she hears. And is it probably a man's voice she is hearing."

"Gee thanks for all your help Jazz," Danny said sarcastically, "Now that you have bored us out of our minds will you please get out of my room!" Danny shouted. Jazz folded her arms.

"Well you welcome for helping you. But fine, I'll go. Just think about what I said." And with that she walked out of his room.

"You know Danny, Jazz might be right." Sam said. "I mean think about it. She is talking to herself and is apparently doing things she doesn't want to do. It fits."

"Except for the shaking." Danny folded his arms. "And the part about losing control. Over what I do not know." The three looked at each other. Who is she?

Several months later

"Time to go back to school. Hu-ray." Sam groaned as she and and her friends walked into first period. Danny took his normal seat in the back and noticed that there was a new seat next to him. Tapping them on the shoulder Danny pointed this out to Sam and Tucker.

"I wonder who it's for." Tucker said looking at Danny. Danny shrugged. At that moment Mr. Lancer came into the room carrying his briefcase.

"Class," he said, "we have a new student. She is new here and is very shy. So be nice. Please welcome to Casper High Elaina Giale." A small yet beautiful girl walked into the room. Her blond hair was pulled back into a tight ponytail. In her arms she carried her school books and her own personal reading book. Twilight the cover read.

"Miss Giale why don't you take the empty seat next to Mr. Fenton. Danny, you will be showing Elaina around today. Got it." Danny thought of his ghost hunting.

'What if my ghost sense goes off.' He thought. As if reading his mind Sam passed a note to Danny. Tucker and I can distract her if your ghost sense goes off. It read.

"Mr. Fenton, I'm waiting."

"Oh ah, yeah. Got it."

"Good. Miss Giale." Mr. Lancer pointed at her seat the she was to sit in. Elaina nodded her head and started to walk toward her seat. When she reached it she looked up and her eyes met with Danny's. Danny's eyes widened with shock. He stared into the same orange eyes filled with pain and agony from that ghost not so long ago.

Okay I have fixed up this chapter. The next two haven't been redone but I am working on them. They are going to be different then what they are right now. Feel free to read them. They are going to be different in a few days though. Please review and tell me what you think of the revised version. Thanks.