-1Rough Draft

Im still new to the Star Trek universe! So please excuse anything that is a bit wrong. I really only watch TOS and Im learning more and more about the Characters.

Also if you are just looking to flame someone, please just don't read this. This is just a goof off thing I do in my free time and Im not looking to get into something with someone because one character isn't perfect! I just wrote this to have fun and to actually learn more about my writing and about the coolest characters in all of the Star Treks! Thankies .

"Search the ship." Commanded James T. Kirk, with great haste in his voice.

The Enterprise was on its way to a newly discovered planet to discus relations with the barley humanoid race, but soon the voyage was interrupted by the discovery of a ship of unknown class. The ship was deraliked, not moving in the space around it. When searching for signs of life they had only found one faint sign. It wasn't even human, in fact they had no clue as to what it was. Some alien life form with human like readings, that's all they could deduce.

It was on its last bit of power for the emergency life support systems and those would be gone in a few minutes. Captain Kirk had sent Scotty to see if he could push a little more life into the ships power. But still it seems shaky and unsafe. The team had been transported into what seemed to be a cafeteria. And from there Kirk had ordered a few red shirts to search the ship and alert him of anything. He was standing next to his friends, one tall with pointed ears known as Mr. Spock, and one who was of average height who was very much so human.

"Captain, I would suggest we search the bridge, the sensors indicate that the life sign is there." Spock said, in his emotionless voice.

Kirk nodded, "Be on your best guard. I don't want to get thrown into another dimension of anything weird. "

There was a small smile on Dr. McCoy's face, he was thinking of a few times when that had happened. He looked at Kirk, now a bit more serious, there might be a life in the balance. " What exactly are we looking for?"

Spock answered this swiftly, "The life form appears to be humanoid, but the computer informs me that this life form isn't really human. "

The trio began to walk through the shaky ship. Down a hall where the lights were flickering, a few men lay on the way, dead. All McCoy could do was shake his head, wanting to get whoever did this. The ship appeared to be a passenger ship, holding cargo and transporting passenger to their destination. Though this galaxy wasn't fully mapped out, there weren't any creatures who would harm life like this. Could it have been Klingons?

The Vulcan looked at his tricorder, searching for where the bridge was. It was only a few halls away. The lights flickered, this place was so gloomy, with the smoke acting like fog. The three men were walking slowly watching their steps. The ship was falling apart! At this moment in time Kirk realized that this ship would not support life for much longer. And with this realization he spoke quickly, " Spock, Bones, we need to get out of here quick! " he reached for his communicator, "Kirk to Enterprise!"

"Enterprise here!" responded the charming voice of Uhura.

"Tell Transporter room to get ready"

Kirk finished his sentence and was right in front of the door that would lead to the destroyed bridge, he didn't want to open the door, not wishing to see the dead crew. But there was a life that need to be saved. He had to force open then door, and when he did there was a sight before him. All the bodies were laid out around the room, on their backs, hands on their chests. Someone cared enough to place them that way. Though it was a bit shocking, they couldn't linger for much longer, the smoke was beginning to thicken.

Of course it was Spock who noticed first. Off by the helm was a figure, one that couldn't be seen properly through the smoke. A figure hunched over the console, not moving. "Captain, over there" Spock moved swiftly, navigating the peaces of the sealing and sparks. He knew the danger that was about to happen. The bridge was on fire, he had to grab this humanoid and get them to safety. He picked the creature up and gracefully rushed back to the door.

The men rushed back right in time, for the bridge erupted in flames. When they were safely down the hall, Kirk called the ship and ordered all personal transported back and to have a stretcher waiting. There wasn't enough transporter pads for everyone to bored at once. The men waited, in the dark hallway.

McCoy took up his light, now looking at the face of the girl that they had just rescued. She looked much like a human! He was looking over her wounds, only minor ones though, least nothing he could see at the moment. But she was stable, and that's all the mattered! Now was the time for McCoy to start something with their Vulcan companion.

"You were human enough to jump through there, risking your life to save someone…"

"I was doing my job. I was the only one who could possible maneuver fast enough to get through. It would have been illogical for you or the captain to do so." Spock wanted to say more, but soon they were transported back onto the ship.