Star struck
Hey guy hows it goin this is my first fanfic so plz tell me if im doin sumthin wrong. Don't hesitate to harass me.
ps. no wings
pss. iggy is not blind
Summary: max is a average girl who lives with a average family in a average home in York. But what happens when she bumps into a certain superstar Nick venom when she goes on a holiday to California to visit her grandma?summary sucks bad! FAX! NIGGY!ELLA x OC.
Chapter 1: chapter 1
Max's POV
"Max! Get up or we're gonna be late!...Max get up now!...MAXIMUM RIDE GET UP OR WE'RE GONNA MISS THE PLANE!"
Ugh and I thought America was a free country. Sigh. After what seemed like 5 minute of more shouting I got up and got dressed.
Oh I almost forgot. My name is Maximum ride. I have light brown hair with natural blonde highlights that comes down to my shoulders , I've got brown eyes and I'm 17 years old.
I live with my mum: Valencia, dad: Jeb and my very annoying big sister Ella. Ella is 19 and she is crazy about this 'awesome' singer nick venom.
I don't like him. To me he is just another stuck up super star. I don't even know what my sister sees in him, and she's 2 yrs older than him!
Anyways, school finished yesterday and today we are flying to California to visit my grandmother. It's been two yrs since I last saw her. I'm actually excited.
On the other hand Ella is only happy because she gets to go to a nick venom concert. And apparently she is going to meet him (that's what she says). I mean that girl is crazy 'bout him. She knows when he sleeps, eats showers etc..., that's just creepy.
Anyways so I got dressed and went downstairs.
"Morning mom." I said.
"MAX WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG!"
" Jeez mom what's with the yelling!"
" Sorry sweetie I'm just so tired from packing." She said.
" It's ok." I replied.
*******time skip*********
Right now we are on the plane on our way to kept on talking nonstop about the concert and what she's going to wear (like i was listening). Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, life can be annoying sometimes. We landed at the airport and grandma was there to pick us up.
"Hey grandma how you doin?"
" Hello maximum it's been much to long." Grandma said.
We had our hugs and told each other what we've been doing etc...
Ella's POV
We were now at grandma's house. It was huge! ! I'm so excited I get to go to a nick venom concert. Ok so I know that I'm like 2yrs older than him but who cares!
I went downstairs and into the kitchen to talk to mom.
"Hey, mom?"
"Yeah honey?"
"Can I take gran's car to the concert?"
"Sure honey but you have to take max with you."
"What! No no no no no no."
This is soooo not fair. Ugh!. Why does she always have to ruin my day?
Max's POV
"mom says I have to take you to the concert!"
"Damn Ella no need to shout!" What is it with people shouting today?
"Do I have to go?"
"Yep!" she said popping the p.
********another time skip i'll name this one...french fries********
So right now we are at the concert. Well Ella went inside and she left me in the car. Apparently I'm too 'embarrassing' to go with. Stupid sister. Well do you think I'm gonna listen? I mean come on I'm maximum ride you should know me better than that!
Anyways I got out of the car and went to the back door of the staples centre (where the concert was being held at), I was about to open the door when...
Soooooo what do u guys think. I know its awful. I just cant get the right wording. I got lots of plots but puting it into words is hard. I feel ur pain authors. Im sorry it was that bad I probalay am the worst ever. But I promise u guyz I'll try harder and make it better. And ppl if u hav advice don't hesitate to tell me. Questions are welcome and if u hav ideas for me (even though I got lots of plots) It would b nice. So sorry guyz T_T.
others will come when i introduce them to the story.
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