I totally didn't realize just how short the first draft of this was, and that it made no since b/c I had facts in there bkwrds! So, I am just going to add on the second part of this and make it into chap instead of two and word it so that it makes some since. Sorry that it's so short!
"With this Victioria on the loose, we are going to have to watch all of them expecially Bella very carefully now, even more so than before, and make sure that absoulty nothing goes wrong."
"Well, I know one way to be able to keep him away from her," Paul was grinning evily, "which would allow us to keep closer tabs on her."
"How?" asked Sam.
"The bikes."
"That sounds like a good plan to me, but Jacob,"
"Yes?"
"Don't forget to remind the bloodsucker about the part of the treaty that says that they are not allowed to bite a human, not kill, bite."
"Don't worry. I won't."
"Well, how did it go?" Embry asked.
"'Go'?"
"Yes. How did he respond to the terms of the treaty?"
"Well, Edward," I spit the name of the bloodsucker out, "took the news quite well. I dare even say that he sounded relieved to hear the news."
"Well, then what's the problem?"
"The problem, Quil, is that Bella apparently that's not going to stop Bella from trying."
"Wait," said Emry, "what do you mean 'that's not going to stop Bella from trying'?"
"I mean that by the time I had gotten there, Bella had already decided to become one of them."
"WHAT!" screamed Paul. "She actually wants to become a bloodsucker?"
"You said he seemed relived?" Sam asked.
"Yah, it was almost like he was hoping I would say something like that."
"That's very--ah, itrestring and all, but what are we going to do about Bella?" asked Paul.
"'Do'? What do you mean 'do'? We aren't going to 'do' anything to Bella."
"She's made her choice. Now it's up to us to make ours. However, until she is actually bitten by one of them, there is little we can do besides watch."