All righty! This is my first poem ever! This was orginally an my project for school and my parents thought it was really good so here i am. Even though this is under Inuyasha this is my point of veiw in a non man made garden.
Garden
I could hear the sound of the leaves under my feet
as I walk down the path. Birds singing their song and flying
above.
I shiver at the coldness of the ground beneath me as I sit down to
rest. Seeing the site before me and drinking it in.
It was quite beautiful as I stare at the trees and flowers which
held a beauty in their on way. Seeing both flowers and leaves
presenting their colors; mostly reds, yellows, and oranges.
It was the smell that really got me; the smell of pureness.
The hints of every flower that was there, the trees, and the
fact that this was untouched by mans hands. It truly
smelled heavenly.
I look around at the scenery seeing all kinds of fruits and berries
near and around me. I dare not touch them though. Just the site
alone was enough to imagine the taste of a freshly picked
apple or blueberry. It was tempting but I held strong.
I got up from my spot I had picked out to rest; it was getting
late and I knew that it was time to go home. I would
return tomorrow just to see this beautiful,
pure place again.
That's it! Please go easy on me this was my very first one but i do accept flames! Please also tell me how you think of this! Thanx!