This is the revised version hopefully it will be better, one thing this chapter seems stupid its more of he said she said my 6th chapter is more interesting. Than this chapter so that's why I'm revising it.

Queen of Thieves

Chapter 1 The Meeting

It was a cool summer night in the heart of Egypt, a breeze was picking up, and nothing was stirring except one person. She started to climb out of a window from the palace, since she wasn't that far from the ground she jumped and ran toward the wall that surrounded the whole palace, she raced toward it and looked up.

"This wall is a lot higher than before." Said a girl. She was inches away from the top before she was spotted.

"Hey you, Stop!" Said a guard, he said as he began to walk toward her in a quickened pace

"Like I would..." she said but was cut of by a searing pain in her leg "Ah, Arg." She looked down to find her knee all bloody. For she scraped her knee against the wall trying to get away from the guard

"Great just great." She was at the top of the wall, and began to scale down the other side, just when she was spotted by another guard on the other side.

"Don't these guards ever go to sleep?" She thought to her self as she jumped the rest of the way, but only fell, from her wounded knee

"After her!" Yelled the other guard

She struggled back up and tried to run as fast as she could, but her knee still siege in pain, so she limped the rest of the way from the guard.

"Where's a doctor when you need one." Before she could catch her breath she saw more guards running towards her. She picked up her pace a little bit more

"Oh goodie the party is back." She kept running until she looked back and with out noticing she found herself running into someone. They both fell to the ground with a thud.

"Hey watch where you're going." Said the person, as he rubbed his head and butt, and stood up.

"Sorry, but no time for greetings." She said as she stood up and brushed herself off. She then looked up to see a boy with white hair and gray eyes (I don't remember what his eye color is.) and he was a head taller than her, his clothes showed he was a robber, they were fit for a stealthy person. He looked at her, and soon heard voices. He looked behind her to see the guards coming closer.

"Can you climb?" He asked, looking back at her

"Yes" she said confused, as if that question could be any dumber

"Then climb!" He yelled showing that there was a rope, hanging from the wall, why didn't she think of a rope, of course this was a do now or not at all moment when she left.

"No, thank you I just climbed over this thing I'm not going back over again." She said crossing her arms.

"Fine, either stay here and get caught or climb back up the wall." The boy said as he began to climb the wall. The girl looked back to see the guards even closer now, she jumped on to the rope and said

"Fine, but I'm not climbing any more walls" She started to climb up the wall, the rope was a lot easier than trying to find hand and foot holds. The guards got to the spot where they last saw the two, and were confused, by how fast they disappeared, so they split up and went different directions to search for them.

"Thanks, um...who ever you are?" she said a little confused, as she reach for his hand that he extended towards her,

"Name's Bakura." The boy replied as he coiled up the rope.

"I'm Yuffie." She exclaimed, as she followed him, along the wall. "What were you doing back there?" she questioned

"Oh, nothing." He said as leaped to the nearest roof. Yuffie was stunned that he could do that, so she tried it and almost slipped, but he caught her in before it happened.

"Come on you can tell me." She said as she regained her composure

"You really want to know?" he said as he turned to face her.

"Yes," was all she said as she waited for and answer

"I was going to steal something valuable from the pharaoh's chambers to make some easy money, but you ruined my plans, when you brought those guards with you." He said nonchalantly.

"Well it was a good thing I did, stealing is wrong," She said pointing at his chest

"You've got to make a living some how, and besides, what were you doing behind the palace walls?" he questioned her getting in her face.

"I was escaping to be free from here." She replied turning away from him,

"Your joking right." He chuckled

"Why are you laughing, I'm serious." She said aggravated.

"You wouldn't last a day out there." He pointed toward the wall

"I could to." She said turning around to him getting frustrated

"A person, who has lived in here all her life, wouldn't know a think about out there." He shouted, as he pointed toward the wall again. Yuffie was taken back by this rage, why should she listen to him, she just met him, and he started to sound like her best friend.

"How do you know, I'm not worth being out there, I have lived my life being a slave, and doing things for other people, not once being able to enjoy life,"

"Then, come with me." Bakura said coolly

"What?" she asked confused"

"Come with me?" he repeated the question

"Now I'm not so sure that I want to," she said backing away

"You just said that you could make it out there." Bakura said a little annoyed

"I know but I was just mad that you said I couldn't." she said stepping farther back, she was going to get off the roof, and just forget about trying to escape.

"Well if you ever change your mind again." He said, as he pulled out a necklace, and took it off. "Ask for me and show this to people who know me, they will show you the way." He placed it in her hand, and started to walk the other direction. Yuffie stared at the necklace; it had a mesmerizing design of shifting lines and vibrant colors. She looked back up and found he had disappeared.

"Maybe someday Bakura I will," she whispered, she gazed out beyond the wall, and watched as the sun rose, from the distant.

That's the new revised version of this chapter I might change the other chapters if you want me to.

Ciao for now R&R