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Divergantlover16000

Tris's POV

Today is my first day at dauntless high school. When you are in high school in my area of Chicago you take a test at sixteen to get you transferred to a diffrent high school. If you are a brainiac then you go to erudite high school, if you are a nature and animal lover then you go to amity high school, if you and a person that doesn't like to lie then you go to candor high school, or if you are a selfless person then you go to abnegation high school, and finally if you are a daredevil like me then you go to dauntless high school. So in your first two years of high school you go to the same high school as your parents got transferred to when they were sixteen. As because my parents are selfless my brother calab and I went to abnegation.

My brother Caleb is 10 months older then me. (We don't know what month or day we were born because then that would be self enduleged to celebrate your birthday. ) Caleb is going to be going to erudite high school because he has always enjoyed reading and learning.

The only time in the past 10 years that someone from abnegation is going to be going to dauntless is two years ago when some boy transferred. I don't remember his name though.

I better stop day dreaming right now and start to get-

Caleb-"Beatrice hurry up your going to be late!"

Me-" i told you yesterday that I am now going by Tris Caleb. And I still have an hour!"

Caleb-" just come hurry up if you want a ride to school"

Me-"fine!"

I jumped out of bed and grab my new off the shoulder dark gray crop top, black jean shorts, and my combat boot and throw them on. I also put on very minimal a out of makeup today to make my self feel like I should belong there. I then rush down stairs and grab an apple and my backpack and run out the door because I hear Caleb starting his car. I run to his car and jump in.

He takes one look at my out fit and says " you should go change Beatrice, that is not apropriate for school"

me-" once again call me tris, and second of all, this is apropriate for my school. It's just a crop top and shorts."

Caleb-" uggg. fine. Let's just go"

Once we get to dauntless highschool I say bye to Caleb and head to the office. Once I get there I go to get my schedule and I meet this really nice secretary named ms. Wu, but she told me to call her tori because makes her feel old. I asked if I would be able to pick up my schedule and locker combination. She asked me for my name and school I previously attended and I told her " Tris Prior, Abnegation High school." She then typed some stuff on her tablet and the printer under the desk then proceeded to print out my schedule and code.

I thanked her and headed out to search for my locker. As I was walking out i bumped in to a guy and I fell right on my butt. (How embarrassing!)

I then stood up and apologized and said "my names tris. What's yours?"

Guy-" my name is-"

i hope that you guys enjoyed my first story! Thank for reading. Have a good day