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"Regina!"
"Regina, get up!"
Regina groaned. What time is it? She thought "Regina get up, you have 20 minutes to get ready for school!" her mother yelled from downstairs.
Oh shit. Why didn't she wake me sooner? Regina sat up "I'm up" she yelled back. Did she say 20 minutes? Regina looked at the clock 8:10. Crap. Regina ran to the bathroom. She grabbed the handle and it was locked.
"Zelena! I have 20 minutes!"
"Hold on!"
"Mom, Zelena holding up the bathroom!" Regina yelled downstairs. No reply. "Daddy, Zelena holding up the bathroom!"
"Zelena, hurrying up, your sister only has 20 minutes." Henry stated.
"Hold on!" Zelena replied.
Regina ran downstairs. "Regina stop running!" Cora said.
Regina went into the kitchen and turned on the faucet, knowing, if water runs somewhere, water anywhere else would be cold. "Reginaaaa! Okay, I'm getting out, just stop it with the water!" Zelena yelled.
Regina walked back upstairs, with a smug expression, walking to the bathroom. "You little brat" Zelena said as she walked past her. Regina looked at the clock in the bathroom and saw that it was 8:15. "Arghhh". She brushed her teeth and started applying her makeup. Eyeshadow and lip balm since she has to be there at 8:30. She went to her bedroom, and decided a pair of black jeans and a dark purple blouse would suffice for her first day. She went into her closet to find some shoes. Deciding to go with leather black boots. Ding! Regina grabbed her phone, and looked at the message, she received from her best friend Jefferson. I miss you! Have a good first day!
Regina smiled. I miss you too
"Regina, come on you don't want to be late on your first day." Cora stated from downstairs.
"Coming!" She grabbed her purse, coat and her book bag. "Sorry daddy." Regina stated coming out of her bedroom and bumping into her father.
"It's fine, have a good first day." Her father replied.
"Regina, I'm in the car." Her mother yelled walking out the front door.
"Thanks daddy, I'll see you, once I get home." Regina said and started walking downstairs.
"Love you, princess." Her father called.
"Love you, too." Regina replied walking out the front door.
She got into the passager seat of her mother's Mercedes. "Okay, let's go." Regina said to her mother.
"What took you so long? First impressions matter, dear. What are you wearing?" Her mother said, looking at her outfit in disapproval.
"Its all I could put together. I only had 20 minutes, to get ready. Correction, 15 minutes because of Zelena." Regina replied to her mother.
"Could have gotten up sooner." Cora muttered
Regina rolled her eyes at her mother. "Should have woken me up sooner." Regina muttered. "Well mother, first impressions matter, so we can either be late and you can pick out my outfit or we can be there on time and just forget about it?" Regina replied.
Her mother sighed. "Let's go."
Regina felt good. Winning a battle with her mother always made her fill good. But even though she felt great, she still felt nervous. She just wants to get good grades and have good friends, but what if the curricular is harder than at her old school? What if she doesn't make friends? What if everything goes wrong? What if..
"Regina would you stop with the tapping." Her mother said.
"Sorry." Regina replied. She absentmindly started to do it again. What if I don't fit in? What if I don't…
"Regina would you please stop!" Her mother said.
"Sorry, I didn't mean to do it." Regina said.
"What has you tapping you foot so much?" Her mother asked.
"Im just nervous." Regina said.
"About what? Being at a new school?" Cora questioned.
"Yes, I don't know anyone there, I don't know if I will fit in. I don't know if the curricular is harder." Regina expressed.
"Just think, no one knows you there. You can start new, you can choose your reputation. And not be judge. And if you don't fit in then you don't fit in. Don't try to fit in because you shouldn't be something that you are not. And Regina, you are very smart, so I think you can handle the schools curricular." Cora said, trying to ease her daughters nerves.
"Thanks. So just be myself and try not to fit in and be something I am not." Regina smiled, feeling better.
"Exactly, just be your smart, beautiful, and sassy self. Just maybe not to much sass." Cora looked at her daughter knowingly.
Cora stop the car. "Why'd you stop?" Regina asked and look at the window, and sighed, seeing the school.
"Just remember what we talked about." Cora said
"Thank you, mother. See you after school." Regina said getting out of the car.
"Regina, your car should be at the house once you get back home." Cora said.
Regina smiled. "Okay, I don't have to ride with you anymore." Regina sassed.
"Don't forget to stop at the principle office." Cora reminded her daughter.
Okay, see you later. Regina smiled and straighten up being bent at the waist to lean on the window.
She turned around and saw some students looking at her. Regina place some of her hair behind her ear and started to walk inside. Realizing that she doesn't know were the principle office is, she decided to ask. "Excuse me, could you point me to the principles office?" Regina asked a group of boys. They just stared at her. "Excuse me?" She decided to ask again.
"Hello, love. Killian Jones." One of the boys outstretched his hand for her to shake. The group of boys was just staring at her. She looked at his hand , then back up at him. "Could you just point me to the principle office?" Regina asked.
"Sure thing." Killian replied. "I'll be back." He said to the group of boys that kept staring at Regina as she and Killian walked away.
"Who is that?" Mary-Margaret asked.
"I don't know must be some new student." David replied.
"Emma, someone trying to steal Killian." Marion said.
"Who?" Emma asked confused. Emma turned around and saw some girl walking with Killian. "Who the hell is that?" Emma asked.
"Some new student." Tink replied.
"But why is she with Killian?" Emma asked with her eyes narrowed, feeling slightly jealous.
"Probably needed some help." Robin responded, trying to defuse the situation. He looked at his ex-girlfriend, who looked happy about Emma being jealous. Marion was always trying to start something. But he had to admit the New girl is really beautiful, with her long hair and her purple blouse that shows off her breast well. And those skinny jeans that shows off her ass.
"Hmmm." Emma responded.
"So here it is, love." Killian stated as they walked to the door of the principles office.
"Thank you." Regina said as she knocked. She could still feel his eyes on her as she knocked but decided to ignore it.
"Come in." Called someone from the inside.
Regina opened the door and walked in. "Hi, I'm Regina Mills." Regina stated as she held out her hand.
"Well hello Regina, I'm the principle of Storybrooke High. Mr. Blanchard." The principle replied. Holding her hand a little longer than necessary and taking in her body slowly. Lingering in inappropriate places.
"Well I was told that I had to come here. To get my schedule and be escorted to my first class." Regina said trying to get his attention back on her eyes.
"Ah, very well. Here is you schedule and follow me to you first class of the day." Mr. Blanchard said handing her the schedule and walking to the door.
Regina walked behind the principle trying to see around the school. Trying to get familiar with the school. She looked down at the schedule and saw that she had Chemistry first. "So Miss Mills, where are you from?" Mr. Blanchard asked as they turned a corner.
"New York, sir." Regina answered polite not really wanting to engage in a conversation.
"Wow, what brought you to StoryBrooke?" Asked the principle.
"Why does it matter?" Regina muttered to herself.
"What was that?" He asked as they walked to the door of the classroom.
"Nothing." Regina said as she walked in, wanting to end the conversation.
"Hello." An older man said at the front of the class.
"Mr. Gold, this is Regina Mills. She is our new student and this is her first class." Mr. Blanchard explained.
"Ah, yes Miss Mills, go ahead and take a seat By Katrina. She looked around the class room and notice that everyone is staring at her.
"Umm, okay." Regina said tucking her hair behind her ear, going to where the teacher was pointing to a student seating at a table by the window.;
Regina took a seat putting her bag under the table. "Hi, I'm Katrina but everyone calls me Tink." Katrina said with a friendly smile. As everyone kept there eyes on Regina.
"Okay class, let's get back to work." Mr. Gold stated as he continued to talk about an experiment the class is doing.
"So, you must be the new girl, everyone is talking about." Tink said.
"Guess so." Regina replied.
"New girl is hot." Regina heard someone whisper behind her.
Regina turned around and look at the guy talking to his partner about her and glare at him. "Really, talking about me while I am right here?" Regina asked.
The two boys looked up and shrugged. Regina just sighed and turned back around. "Okay, that is the experiment. Let me know once you are done. You may go and get your supplies." Mr. Gold stated.
"I'll go get them." Regina said to Tink. Regina got up and went to the supply area. And started to get the supplies needed for the experiment. Which she already did, at her old school. As she was headed back to her seat, she bumped into someone. "Sorry." Regina stated as she looked up and got lost in the most beautiful blue eyes she had ever seen.
"It's fine." He said as he looked up and saw the most beautiful girl…no woman he had ever seen.
Marion looked to see what was taking so long. "What is Robin doing?" She muttered. Marion looked at him and saw him staring at the new girl. What is he doing? Marion felt jealousy run though her as she walked over and grabbed Robins arm and pulled him to her and pressed her lips to his. Robin pulled back. "I was wonder what took you so long babe." Marion stated as she saw, Regina was her name, walk away.
"Marion, what are you doing? And don't call me babe." Robin stated as he walked off. Marion following him back to their table.
"Mr. Gold, can I change partners?" Robin asked from across the room.
"May I ask why?" Mr. Gold asked.
Robin had to think. Tell the truth or make up a lie. "I don't like Marion, she keep trying to distract me." Robin answered truthfully. Marion gasped.
"Robin." Marion stated.
"Umm." Mr. Gold looked around the room. Might as well. "Katrina could you switch with Robin?" Mr. Gold asked smiled.
"But sir." Katrina sighed.
"If you don't want to I could." Regina found herself saying. Why, why would I say that.
"No, it's fine, plus you don't want to be lab partners with Marion." Regina looked at the girl sat next to Robin, who was glaring at her. Marion, the girl that kiss the guy so called Robin. What did I do for that look?
"Okay. I'll switch." Katrina said as she grabbed her stuff and switch places with Robin.
Robin looked at his new lab partner that was the girl he bumped into. "Hi, new lab partner." Robin stated smiling.
"Hi." Regina said not paying attention to Robin but to the experiment.
"My name Robin, Robin Locksley." Robin said still smiling.
Regina looked up and saw the most adorable dimples she had ever seen. "Regina, Regina Mills." Regina said smiling back. Concentrate Regina. "Let's do the lab." Regina said trying to look back at the experiment but finding it hard when he is still smiling at her like that. Finally she looked back down.
Marion glared at Regina. "Marion would you please help?" Tink asked.
"Why should I?" Marion asked annoyed.
"Because you are my lab partner whether you like it or not." Tink said and looked up to find her looking at something. Tink follow her gaze. Saw that she was looking at Regina who was smiling at Robin, who was smiling back. Tink sighed. "You and Robin aren't together anymore." Tink said. Thinking back to when Robin broke up with Marion because he caught her cheating on him.
"Me and Robin are together we are just on a break. Why is he smiling at her like that? She isn't even that pretty." Marion growled.
"Who are we talking about?" Killian asked as he and Emma turned around.
"Regina." Marion said with disgust in her voice and an eye roll. "Why are they still smiling at each other? She isn't even that pretty." Marion scoffed.
"Are you true about that? Because so far I think she is the hottest girl in school." Killian said looking at Regina's body.
"Really, Killian." Emma rolled her eyes.
"What? Have you seen the new girl?" Killian asked
"Yes, I have. I can admit that she is hot but really." Emma stated.
"What? Who would be hotter?" Killian asked.
"Umm, okay. I don't have an answer." Emma said as Killian smirked at her.
"Okay, that is just not true. What about me? I am way hotter than her." Marion said.
"Umm, keep believing that." Killian said as Marion looked at him then threw her beaker at him that had a clear substance in it.
"What the hell!?" Killian yelled.
"Be quiet it is just water." Marion said with a scowl. Then an idea came to her. And she smiled.
"Why are you smiling?" Asked Tink.
"Oh nothing." Marion answered standing up and walking over to the supplies. Grabbing what she needed.
"What are you doing?" asked Emma as she came over. "Is that acid? What are you doing, Marion?" Emma questioned again. Marion went to a faucet and added water to the acid. Marion walked past where Regina and Robin were. And dropped the substance on Regina's shirt.
"What the fuck?" Regina and Robin shouted. Mr. Gold stood up and looked at what Marion dropped on Regina.
"You need to take off your shirt, now. That is acid it is going dissolve your skin." Mr. Gold yelled.
"What the fuck?" Regina yelled as she unbuttoned her shirt and took it off and throw it in the sink and turned on the faucet.
"Holy shit. Hotter than I thought." Killian said.
"Fuck that is hot!" Graham said.
"If you got'em flaut'em!" Emma said.
Everyone eyes were on Regina as she looked down and saw that she was in a red lace bra. Forgetting to put on a tank top under her blouse, since she was rushing. "Fuck!" Regina said as she turned away from everyone.
Mr. Gold handed her is jacket and she covered herself. "What happen?" Mr. Gold asked.
"That is what I like to know." Regina said turning to Marion. "What the fuck happen?" Regina said casting the girl daggers.
"No need to swear, Miss Mills." Mr. Gold said.
"You aren't the one stood in a classroom without a shirt on." Regina sassed. "What happened?" Regina asked for the hundred time.
"I was walking pass and it fell on you. It has a mixture of water in it as well. So it shouldn't cause any fatal convictions." Marion said with wide eyes.
"Why did you have Hydrochloric acid in the first place, it wasn't apart of the experiment?" Regina said with a cold gaze on Marion.
"I, I, uhh. Why were you smiling at Robin, my boyfriend?" Marion asked trying really hard not to break eye contact with Regina but her stare was so intense.
"Really, Marion? So because I smiled at someone you, threw acid on them?" Robin asked so confused. "And I am not your boyfriend!"
Regina walked out of the classroom. What the fuck is wrong with people.
As I said before I am a new writer. So I would like to hear what you guys think of the story and if I should continue. Please review.