Story : Time to Shine
Author: Admiral2
Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ , but I do own Dedra and Jack. ( Jack comes later... WAY later in
the story lol)
AN: hello peoples! This is my first fic. pls no flames . I'm turning 13 & starting school in a
couple of days. ^-^ I really hope it's good. I don't usually write serious stories. So... if it's crappy
... I understand why. Well on with the story! And also I just came up with story in my head. If it's
a little like another story out there, it's by coincidence . Also I'm from the USA & if my Japanese
is wrong or is spelt wrong please inform me. I don't wanna mess up a nice language.
"Talking"
'thinking'
Piccolo & Gohan's mind link talking
[ me sounding important ]
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One cool , clean , spring morning , Gohan and Piccolo were sparring as usual . They have been
training with each other for two years now. Gohan had turned 13 not too long ago. Vegeta is mad
at the fact of Gohan training with Piccolo instead of him. He would tell Gohan what he could and
couldn't do. Gohan never listen to him though. Vegeta would even go to stopping Gohan's
training session with Piccolo. Gohan had to admit it annoyed him. But something told Gohan
today would be different , Vegeta wasn't going to tell him to leave till Gohan was ready to leave.
Piccolo had a feeling that was the way it was going to be today. Piccolo decided it was time for a
break.
" Alright kid , time for a break." , grunted Piccolo . He sat down on the ground & started
meditating." Aw... it was just getting good too." , Gohan protested. Gohan frowned , he knew it
wouldn't work on Piccolo , so he sat down against a tree. 'This is a perfect day. Nothing could go
wrong' , Gohan thought to himself.
Or could it? Gohan couldn't help but chuckle at the scene of Vegeta screaming at him for
refusing not to come home to train with him. Thirty minutes went floated by quickly. To Gohan ,
it felt like fifteen.
"Alright , times up kid." , Piccolo said with a hint of command in it. Piccolo appeared in front
of Gohan.
"I'm ready." Gohan commented when he got up and went into his fighting stance , and the fight
began. While sparring , Piccolo sensed a life-force , actually two life-forces. It finally dawned on
Piccolo that it was the androids they had been battling for weeks. The twins of doom had been
destroying cities after cities . Piccolo had a lot of emotions running in his head , but that mask he
wore was still on his face. He knew he had to tell Gohan.
Gohan , the message was hinting worry in it.
Yes Piccolo? , Gohan started to get worried too because Piccolo was too.
The Androids are heading our way.
Gohan was a little taken back by this , but recovered . Piccolo , I have to tell you something
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AN: Sorry peeps that are reading this. This isn's long , I know . But I have like ... around 13
pages already written . I left it there cause it will be a cliff hanger on what happens next. ^-^
gomen . Well pls review. I gotta know if I'm doing good. Oh corse... hehehe.... well those 13
pages were on notebook paper. Hehehe ... o'well . Tell me if I should continue or not &
remember ... please , no flames. If you don't like it. Just say .. "I don't like it" and go on with
life. Well review! ^-^
Author: Admiral2
Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ , but I do own Dedra and Jack. ( Jack comes later... WAY later in
the story lol)
AN: hello peoples! This is my first fic. pls no flames . I'm turning 13 & starting school in a
couple of days. ^-^ I really hope it's good. I don't usually write serious stories. So... if it's crappy
... I understand why. Well on with the story! And also I just came up with story in my head. If it's
a little like another story out there, it's by coincidence . Also I'm from the USA & if my Japanese
is wrong or is spelt wrong please inform me. I don't wanna mess up a nice language.
"Talking"
'thinking'
Piccolo & Gohan's mind link talking
[ me sounding important ]
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
One cool , clean , spring morning , Gohan and Piccolo were sparring as usual . They have been
training with each other for two years now. Gohan had turned 13 not too long ago. Vegeta is mad
at the fact of Gohan training with Piccolo instead of him. He would tell Gohan what he could and
couldn't do. Gohan never listen to him though. Vegeta would even go to stopping Gohan's
training session with Piccolo. Gohan had to admit it annoyed him. But something told Gohan
today would be different , Vegeta wasn't going to tell him to leave till Gohan was ready to leave.
Piccolo had a feeling that was the way it was going to be today. Piccolo decided it was time for a
break.
" Alright kid , time for a break." , grunted Piccolo . He sat down on the ground & started
meditating." Aw... it was just getting good too." , Gohan protested. Gohan frowned , he knew it
wouldn't work on Piccolo , so he sat down against a tree. 'This is a perfect day. Nothing could go
wrong' , Gohan thought to himself.
Or could it? Gohan couldn't help but chuckle at the scene of Vegeta screaming at him for
refusing not to come home to train with him. Thirty minutes went floated by quickly. To Gohan ,
it felt like fifteen.
"Alright , times up kid." , Piccolo said with a hint of command in it. Piccolo appeared in front
of Gohan.
"I'm ready." Gohan commented when he got up and went into his fighting stance , and the fight
began. While sparring , Piccolo sensed a life-force , actually two life-forces. It finally dawned on
Piccolo that it was the androids they had been battling for weeks. The twins of doom had been
destroying cities after cities . Piccolo had a lot of emotions running in his head , but that mask he
wore was still on his face. He knew he had to tell Gohan.
Gohan , the message was hinting worry in it.
Yes Piccolo? , Gohan started to get worried too because Piccolo was too.
The Androids are heading our way.
Gohan was a little taken back by this , but recovered . Piccolo , I have to tell you something
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
AN: Sorry peeps that are reading this. This isn's long , I know . But I have like ... around 13
pages already written . I left it there cause it will be a cliff hanger on what happens next. ^-^
gomen . Well pls review. I gotta know if I'm doing good. Oh corse... hehehe.... well those 13
pages were on notebook paper. Hehehe ... o'well . Tell me if I should continue or not &
remember ... please , no flames. If you don't like it. Just say .. "I don't like it" and go on with
life. Well review! ^-^