Hello. I'm a bit worried about this. This is my first fan fic and I really hope its ok. or at least passable. I am honestly not a big fan of the brady bunch, actually the last I probably watched it last when I was 8 or so infact I was a little surprised I'm not making a fan fic on an anime show or boy meets world. The bradys may be out of character. I hope this isn't a waste of your time. I would love reviews, even flames. But I'm just writing this for fun so be a lil nice, k? *Sighs well here we go. Unwanted Pain Jan stared at the picture of her family inside her hatred grew, this hatred ran threw her brady veins. She stared at her sister, Marcia. Marcia with her long beautiful blond hair and sweet face. Marcia with her charming personality. It was Marcia who got all the guys. And Marcia whom everyone adored. It wasn't Jan. Jan didn't have the best looks in the world. She wasn't ugly but in comparisan to her sister she looked like a toad. And as for personality, she lacked that. She tended to complain allot. And in the subject of men, Jan had an F. Ofcourse there had been her made up boyfriend Goerge Glass who she actually found out existed but theey never really ended up going out. They just gazed longingly at each other and that was about it. Jan couldn't stand it anymore. She didn't want everyone to ignore her anymore. She wanted to be noticed, and be adored the way Marcia was. The dirty-blond haired girl threw the picture at the floor. The frame instantly shattered into little glass pieces on the floor. The picture remained unharmed. Marcia stared up at the pissed off Jan and kept her white smile glued to her face.
Jan stared at it on the floor for at bit before leaving the mess and going outside. She sat on a swing. The spring breeze played with her hair. A tear rolled down her face creating a path. She didn't wipe it away. The sun set and a moon replaced it she found no interest in the sky's beautiful, but this was probably a good thing, Jan hated beautiful things at the moment and introducing new beauty might have irritated her more. "Dinner!" A voice screamed from inside the house. Jan slowly stood from the swing and walked inside. The ground was no longer scattered with glass, someone had cleaned it, most likely Alice. When Jan got settled in a chair at the table everyone began to chat. "Mrs. Brady, I'm sorry about your frame, I don't know what happened." Alice commented. "Oh no, its oaky. I can get a new one" Carol Brady responded a smile on her face and bright eyes. Jan sat listening to her family's conversations. Marcia talkd to Greg about her date with football star of the school, Ken McClellend. Jan rolled her eyes though she was extremely envious. She only picked at her food. She had no apitite. Marcia went on chatting as did everyone else. Jan wasn't noticed. Again. Lulu: What was that!? Mia: My fan fic. Lulu: It was so short. And too stupid to be a fan fic. Mia: Gee, Lulu, your mean today. *hits Lulu with pillow. Yeah its short and not so great. I really don't plan on writing anymore unless you would like me to. -mia