So, this story got deleted because it included script format dialogue. I have gone through the process of changing the entire story to normal dialogue and will now be re-uploading the whole story up to where I left off (Chapter 15) and then continuing on until I finish the story. I'm sorry if you were following this story and suddenly found that it had disappeared. But here it is again:
This is the first chapter of a series of chapters I will be releasing based on a Calvin and Hobbes time travel adventure.
It has a lot of dialogue however I also added some 3rd person storytelling, while the first few chapters are very dialogue dense, later on the story will turn into more of a 3rd person story than just back and forth dialogue.
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The Ultimate Time Travel Adventure
Chapter 1: The Plan
"Hobbes, it's time to go on another time travel adventure," said Calvin
"Oh no, not only is time travel the most dizzy nausea inducing thing in existence, we always end up getting almost eaten by dinosaurs, or trying to convince your future self to do homework," Hobbes replied
"Relax you big baby. This time we're going far into the future," Calvin explained
"Ugh, even worse," Hobbes said.
"It's gonna be great, you see. We'll simply go into the future, and tell my grandson to give us technology from the future. Then we bring it back here, and say it's our own invention and we become rich and happy!" Calving explained.
"How about we just eat a cookie in order to be happy," Hobbes proposed
"Once we're rich, we'll buy tons of cookies… and tuna fish," Calvin said.
Hobbes finally gave in, "Well, if it involves tuna I guess I'll join you,"
"Come on, let's go up to my room and plan the whole thing," Calvin said.
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"OK. So this is the Plan step by step," Calvin explained to Hobbes,
Step 1. Once Mom and Dad are asleep, we sneak down and take all the cookies from the cookie jar.
Step 2. Once we have the cookies, we come back up here and pack it up with the rest of the supplies.
Step 3. Then we put on our time travel equipment and get ready to go.
Step 4. We travel 80 years into the future, and then ask my grandson to give us an advanced piece of technology.
Step 5. We grab it and put it in the time machine.
Step 6. We come back and become rich and famous.
"Why don't I just wait for you here and make sure the coast is clear?" Hobbes proposed.
"Shut up you big sissy," replied Calvin
"Fine, so when do we get the food?" Hobbes asked.
"We have to wait till Mom and Dad are asleep; meanwhile we'll prepare everything else," Calvin responded.
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"All right, it's finally 01:00. Mom and Dad should definitively be asleep by now. Time to execute Step #1," Calvin whispered.
"Shall I take the map?" asked Hobbes.
"Yes," replied Calvin.
They both snuck over to the stairs, but at the top Calvin tripped over Hobbes' tail and they both slipped and fell all the way down the stairs.
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"Do you hear something?" asked Dad.
"Wha-?" asked Mom while yawning.
THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!
"Oh no!" said Mom.
"Let's pretend we didn't hear that and go back to sleep," whispered Dad.
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"You incompetent moron," Calvin screamed quietly.
"Hey, it was you who tripped on my tail," Hobbes quietly shouted back
"That's because your tail is a stupid evolutionary flaw," Calvin shouted a little louder than before.
"No, it's just that you humans are too clumsy and don't look where they're going," Hobbes countered.
"Shut up before Mom or Dad wake up," said Calvin tensely.
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"That's it, I'm going upstairs to check what in the world they are doing," said Dad.
"Yeah, you go ahead and I'll wait for you here," Mom muttered.
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Calvin and Hobbes proceeded to sneak over to the kitchen completely unaware that Dad was already on his way up to their room to check what they where doing.
"Great Mr. Einstein, how are we going to get the cookies now? They're at the top of the fridge," asked Hobbes.
"Don't worry, just lift me up and I'll grab them," replied Calvin
"What? Why don't YOU lift ME up?" asked Hobbes.
"Shhhhhhh. They'll hear you," Calvin quietly screamed.
"Fine, fine," muttered Hobbes.
Hobbes lifted Calvin up.
"Whoa, what did you eat bricks?" asked Hobbes out loud.
"Just lift me up a little higher…" said Calvin as he reached for the cookie jar.
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Dad entered Calvin's room.
"Calvin what on earth are you doing!" he shouted.
He looked around and realize Calvin was nowhere to be found.
"Calvin?" he asked out loud.
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"Almost got it…" muttered Calvin as he reached for the cookie jar with the tip of his fingers.
He accidentally tipped the cookie jar over causing it to crash onto the floor.
"YOU MORON!" Hobbes yelled.
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Dad was looking around the room looking for Calvin…
"Calvin, this isn't a game, you have 3 seconds to show yourse-" he was saying before he was cut off.
CRASH!
"Oh what now?" he roared as turned towards the stairs.
Mom who was still asleep assumed Dad caused the crash, "Shhh honey, you'll wake up Calvin."
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"QUICK! YOU GRAB THE TUNA FISH FROM THE FRIDGE AND I'll PICK UP THE COOKIES!" cried Calvin in a hurry.
Dad hurried downstairs towards the kitchen.
"He's coming!" cried Hobbes in panic.
Dad entered kitchen and looked around.
"CALVIN I-" he was getting ready to scream at Calvin.
"Calvin?" he said as he looked around the kitchen.
"Hide inside the fridge, this was your best idea?" Hobbes questioned.
"Shhh, I think he's here," whispered Calvin.
Dad examines the broken cookie jar.
"What on earth is going on?" asked Dad.
Hobbes passed gas.
"What? Oh, it was just the window, that must have blown the cookie jar off," Dad reasoned.
He closed window and went back to sleep.
"That was a close one," sighed Calvin
"I'm claustrophobic; let's get out before I go crazy," Hobbes said as he began to panic.
"Y-Yeah, i-its c-cold," Calvin said.
Calvin pushed on door but it wouldn't open.
"Oops," said Calvin.
"HELP!" cried Hobbes.
Thank you for reading the first chapter of the series.
Feel free to review, comment, add to favorites etc. Add any suggestions you have.
Stay tuned for the next chapters.
I'm sorry that the sudden changes between dialogue and 3rd person story telling are a little weird and awkward. I was just getting started with my story at this point and remember it was originally in script form dialogue. Later on I did change to actual normal storytelling, so please excuse these first few chapters.
-AFYTXR