Alrite. This is my first go at a fan-fiction.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything. Yup. 'cept the plot and Carlei, Annie, Emma, Zoe and Jenna. If you recognize it I don't own it.
This is written before Stanley came to CGL and before Barfbag. I'm replacing him with a boy named Jason. Nicknamed Flight. The story is written in Annie's point of view (secrets)
So heas one more thing. REVIEW..please. (
Annie POV
I wasn't a bad girl. I don't go around beating people up, I don't drink and I don't smoke. I was about as normal as you could get. I ran track and did really well in school. Then my world changed. Mom left, Dad drank, Connor (my brother) was sent to CGL because of simply being in the wrong place at the wrong time. And now I'm totally alone. At school they call me L. L for loner and loser. Mr. Persson (my guidance counselor) said "Annie, I'm very sorry for what I'm about to do but it seems its for the best. Camp Green Lake has opened a girls wing and the state agrees that you should spend a little while in there to learn you're parents did some very stupid things". I don't understand, I really don't. but I leave tommorow. Wish me luck. Mr. Persson said that I could bring a few things with me. I'm bringing you my faithful diary of course and some hairties and bandannas and my track shoes. The ones I had that Kenyan olympian sign.
I got on the bus with four other girls. One of them was blowing and cracking her gum. She had darker skin but very pretty her hair was long and pulled up into two french braids with a bandanna. She sat a few seats away from me. She walked over and sat next to me. "I'm Carlei" she said. "Annie" I said. "How old are you?" she asked me. I couldn't help but notice she had a very brooklyn accent. "13" I responded. "Wow" she said "Your pretty young to be coming here. I'm 16" "Oh" was all I could think of. "No one calls me Carlei" Carlei continued, " I'm Crash" "How'd you get sent here" She asked I didn't want to tell her. She had to have done something really bad. I didn't want her looking at me like I was a wimp. But I had no choice "I'm a ward of the state" I answered truthfully "No one left". she looked a little shocked. "What about you?" I asked. "I did it for family. My cousin was in deep trouble and some gay ass guy tried to beat her up. She called me and I got him, got him bad. Nobody messes with the people I care for" she said. She started to point out the other girls. "That's Zoe" she said, pointing to a girl with pretty brown hair. "She's British and had an alcohol problem" "That's Emma and Jenna" she said pointing to Identical red head girls. "Family problems. Emma stole a car to get them away from the family and then Jenna burnt the house down. Hence their nicknames Pyro and Flash" I learned in the two day drive that Carlei was the leader. The rest of the girls knew not to mess with her. But Carlei was also something else. Caring. "Any of you who mess with my girl, Secrets, you gotta mess with me" (Secrets is my new nickname) Zoe gave it to me because she said I'm always writing in my diary. Crash already has kind of taken me on as a sister. She said its because I'm always smiling. Im the youngest one here. Carlei is 16. Zoe is 17 and the twins are 16.
"I'm Mr. Pen Dance Key" the man introduced himself. "Your cabin hasn't been finished yet, so we are putting you in with D Cabin. I'll introduce you to the boys in a few minutes. But this aint no girl scout camp you're going to work here and work hard. I'm sure the boys will tell you what you have to do" I looked at Carlei, she was smiling in a weird way. "Another thing.no funny buisness and I send you all to juevy hall like that" he said snapping his fingers. "I mean it" he added as if any of us doubted it.
It was a pretty short walk to Cabin D. Mr. Pendanski talked the whole time "I understand you all have made mistakes in your life. Otherwise you wouldn't be here. But here you're getting a clean slate and no where to go but down if you mess up" and "Beware of the Warden" like he was some dangerous animal.
"Boys" Mr. Pendanski called he introduced them as they were in a straight line "Rex, Alan, Theodore, Ricky, Connor, Zero, and Jason" but moments later Rex stood up and said "Get a hold of yourself, Mom.I'm X- ray and this here is Squid, Armpit, Zigzag, Time, Zero, and Flash"
Then "Mom" introduced us "Only 3 of the girls will be staying in this Cabin with you" he told the group. "Carlei" he said Carlei walked forward, "Annie" I followed Carlei and Jenna. Jenna looked hurt that she wasn't in the same group as her sister and Emma wore an identical expression. "Welcome to Cabin D" the boy called X-ray said.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything. Yup. 'cept the plot and Carlei, Annie, Emma, Zoe and Jenna. If you recognize it I don't own it.
This is written before Stanley came to CGL and before Barfbag. I'm replacing him with a boy named Jason. Nicknamed Flight. The story is written in Annie's point of view (secrets)
So heas one more thing. REVIEW..please. (
Annie POV
I wasn't a bad girl. I don't go around beating people up, I don't drink and I don't smoke. I was about as normal as you could get. I ran track and did really well in school. Then my world changed. Mom left, Dad drank, Connor (my brother) was sent to CGL because of simply being in the wrong place at the wrong time. And now I'm totally alone. At school they call me L. L for loner and loser. Mr. Persson (my guidance counselor) said "Annie, I'm very sorry for what I'm about to do but it seems its for the best. Camp Green Lake has opened a girls wing and the state agrees that you should spend a little while in there to learn you're parents did some very stupid things". I don't understand, I really don't. but I leave tommorow. Wish me luck. Mr. Persson said that I could bring a few things with me. I'm bringing you my faithful diary of course and some hairties and bandannas and my track shoes. The ones I had that Kenyan olympian sign.
I got on the bus with four other girls. One of them was blowing and cracking her gum. She had darker skin but very pretty her hair was long and pulled up into two french braids with a bandanna. She sat a few seats away from me. She walked over and sat next to me. "I'm Carlei" she said. "Annie" I said. "How old are you?" she asked me. I couldn't help but notice she had a very brooklyn accent. "13" I responded. "Wow" she said "Your pretty young to be coming here. I'm 16" "Oh" was all I could think of. "No one calls me Carlei" Carlei continued, " I'm Crash" "How'd you get sent here" She asked I didn't want to tell her. She had to have done something really bad. I didn't want her looking at me like I was a wimp. But I had no choice "I'm a ward of the state" I answered truthfully "No one left". she looked a little shocked. "What about you?" I asked. "I did it for family. My cousin was in deep trouble and some gay ass guy tried to beat her up. She called me and I got him, got him bad. Nobody messes with the people I care for" she said. She started to point out the other girls. "That's Zoe" she said, pointing to a girl with pretty brown hair. "She's British and had an alcohol problem" "That's Emma and Jenna" she said pointing to Identical red head girls. "Family problems. Emma stole a car to get them away from the family and then Jenna burnt the house down. Hence their nicknames Pyro and Flash" I learned in the two day drive that Carlei was the leader. The rest of the girls knew not to mess with her. But Carlei was also something else. Caring. "Any of you who mess with my girl, Secrets, you gotta mess with me" (Secrets is my new nickname) Zoe gave it to me because she said I'm always writing in my diary. Crash already has kind of taken me on as a sister. She said its because I'm always smiling. Im the youngest one here. Carlei is 16. Zoe is 17 and the twins are 16.
"I'm Mr. Pen Dance Key" the man introduced himself. "Your cabin hasn't been finished yet, so we are putting you in with D Cabin. I'll introduce you to the boys in a few minutes. But this aint no girl scout camp you're going to work here and work hard. I'm sure the boys will tell you what you have to do" I looked at Carlei, she was smiling in a weird way. "Another thing.no funny buisness and I send you all to juevy hall like that" he said snapping his fingers. "I mean it" he added as if any of us doubted it.
It was a pretty short walk to Cabin D. Mr. Pendanski talked the whole time "I understand you all have made mistakes in your life. Otherwise you wouldn't be here. But here you're getting a clean slate and no where to go but down if you mess up" and "Beware of the Warden" like he was some dangerous animal.
"Boys" Mr. Pendanski called he introduced them as they were in a straight line "Rex, Alan, Theodore, Ricky, Connor, Zero, and Jason" but moments later Rex stood up and said "Get a hold of yourself, Mom.I'm X- ray and this here is Squid, Armpit, Zigzag, Time, Zero, and Flash"
Then "Mom" introduced us "Only 3 of the girls will be staying in this Cabin with you" he told the group. "Carlei" he said Carlei walked forward, "Annie" I followed Carlei and Jenna. Jenna looked hurt that she wasn't in the same group as her sister and Emma wore an identical expression. "Welcome to Cabin D" the boy called X-ray said.