Guess who's back! NO it's not the pope! It 's me ... sorry to keep you guys waiting so much just to make you wait some more, but I'm having a slight writer's wall..-_-; Yes well here I am to introduce the revised first chapter, as you can see it's made a big improvement...

"Ah,here it is, Room 131."

Kagome was new in school. She had transferred here from Osaka Junior High.
Kagome had barely passed the exit exams she needed, but she did and it
would be fun to meet new people.

"Excuse Me," said Kagome

"Are you the new student?" asked Mrs.Tamashi

"Yes, I am"

This was Kagome's first class World History and sitting in the very back of
the class was a guy with sliver hair, which Kagome thought was odd.

"Class this our new student: Kagome Higurashi"

There was a reply of muttered and mumbled "Hello's" but it seemed
comforting enough.

She then noticed something abnormal. The same guy that had silver hair also
had huge amber eyes...that were watching her.

"That's kind of creepy" Kagome murmured in off-hand sort-of way.

Sure enough the guy had heard her.

"What's creepy?" he replied with slight annoyance in his voice.

"Well, you're staring right at me." She replied hastily.

"So?" he asked.

"Nothing."

She was then assigned a seat to the right of the silver-haired guy.

"Ok class if you will now turn your books to chapter 3 you will see the conquest of Egypt by the Greek" announced Mrs.Tamashi, earning a groan from
the class.

And the teacher rambled on and on to everyone's dismay...and to Kagome's
surprise she couldn't take her eyes off of the strange boy until...

"WHAT???" He practically screamed

"Oh nothing...just wanted to know your name" Kagome, with a blush stained
over her cheeks, said.

"Wouldn't you like to know?" he replied grinning.

"Actually, I would." She replied annoyed.

"Ok, the names Inuyasha, Inuyasha Hiromoto"

That sentence had caught someone's attention and coming towards their desks was a guy who wore blue jeans, a tight blue shirt and a cap protecting his
long black hair in a high ponytail.
Not as good as I had planned, but it's a start. Await my next correction
sometime soon because until I'm done with these, no new chapter...: (
Please don't kill me...