Hello people of the universe! I hope you will enjoy this story of Rise of the Guardians and please give me some criticism for my work, It would really help me on my way to becoming an author! Oh and I haven't seen the movie yet so don't be hard if the info is out of text.
THANKS, TheAwesomeBananaOne.
Thunder booms echoed across the darkened, gray sky, sending even the ferocious polar bear back shaking to his den. At the North Pole the storm grew much worse, rain flowed endlessly down from the blackened clouds causing pools of water to form on the ice. Two silhouettes stood in the middle of the chaos, they didn't even wear a decent coat to keep them from freezing to death. One of the silhouettes was immensely large, he wore a luxurious dark brown fur cape, a dusty burgundy shirt with dark brown pants. The other was exceedingly skinnier, smaller and extremely younger than the larger silhouette. This unusual young boy happened to have pure white hair and striking blue eyes, frost glazed over his blue sweater almost making it look like frost itself and wore light, almond brown jeans. The white-haired boy yelled at his massive partner, but his voice was barley a whisper in the yowling winds of the storm. "North! Tell me again why we're here!?"
"We're here to train Jack! Hopefully you now about that concept" replied North.
"Yes I do now what training is as a matter of fact! I may still be a teen but that doesn't mean I'm not smart". Jack yelled. The winter spirit seemed not bothered by the icy blasts of wind, due to the fact that he is the bringer and controller of winter. "I know that Jack. Look, from this day forward you will try and master your unique abilities by training with me every single day" North replied with a huge yell.
"What?! I thought I mastered my skills back when we defeated Pitch!" Jack protested. North let out an uncontrollable laugh as if he was surrounded by tickling feathers. "Controlled your powers?! Remember the time you nearly froze all the yetis and elves just because I didn't let you skip your rounds to watch a horror movie" North started to laugh again, this time even more powerful.
"I'm still here ya' know" Jack mutter-yelled. North, remembering the important task at hand, stopped laughing instantly and regain control over his funny-side. "Every guardian has to train to keep their skills in tip-top shape! Now that your one of us, you have to keep training too." North yelled.
"Fine, what do you want me to do" Jack mutter-yelled again.
"I want you to freeze the rain." Jack's electric blue eyes stared in disbelief at North, his mouth hung open in surprise. "Just the rain? That's easy! I thought you'd give me something harder to do!" laughed Jack. Raising his frosted staff, it glowed a magnificent ice blue and froze all the rain drops turning them into pure, feathery snowflakes. "That was good, but that wasn't your task. I want you to turn one rain drop into snow flake." North said. Now Jack had the look of astonishment and the "are-you-out-of-your-mind" look plastered onto his sheet white face. "Haha! That's a very funny joke Santy" Jack said cynically.
"This is no joke Jack. See if you can do it." North encouraged. Letting out a huff, Jack lifted his head up high to see the pouring rain more clearly. Trying to distinguish each falling drop, frustration boiled inside of him like a cauldron for the rain kept blurring his vision. Jack finally had enough and adjusted the clouds into snow clouds, changing the heavy rain into white, ice-cream snow. Frost's eyes glared at North, filled with frustration and anger. What was the use of making him do such an impossible task? What did he have to prove to the Guardians leader? "Oh, Jack. You give up so easily. Something a guardians must not have." North replied with a loud sigh.
"I do not give up easily." Jack growled.
"You have much to learn, young guardian, but I guess we should head back" North replied blankly, not showing any of the emotions he was feeling. Jack just gave a shrug and trudged through the heavily water-polluted ice. "One more thing Jack. Mind blasting some wind on me, my hair could use a blow drying" North asked. An uproar of laughter erupted from Jack Frost, he clutched his belly as if the laughter was hurting his stomach. "W-what hair?" Jack replied with an amused smirk spreading across his face. "Ya, Ya, Ya. Go ahead with the old-man jokes. Just you wait until you reach my age" North grunted.
Well, that's it for the first chapter, thank you for reading and don't hold back on the critisim, but please, no swearing or anything that you wouldn't say to your grandmother.
Thanks, TheAwesomeBananaOne.