hi, this is my first fanfic, so it may not be the best, but don't hold back on the reviews I need to know what I did wrong , this is at a high school, and the layout is where, floor one is the town floor essentially, and it also has the gym and cafeteria, floor two is the classrooms, half of floor three is Thunderclan, Riverclan is on the other half, floor four is exactly like floor three except it's Shadowclan and Windclan.
Hollyleaf's POV
"Another assembly . How I hate my life. " I complain while my roommate continues to blast her music I turn it off.
"MY MUSIS" Cinderheart yells.
"Music" I correct
"YOU KNOW MUSIC HELPS ME. Too much work." Cinderheart yells.
" We haven't even started school yet." I complain
"I almost failed seventh grade and now it's ninth." Cinderheart whines.
"LOSSEN UP IT'LL BE FINE" I tried cheering her up.
Cinderheart's POV
We get to the assembly.
Thunder drones on.
"CINDERHEART" Hollyleaf yells.
"whuh" I yawned.
"YOU SLEPT THROUGH THE ASSEMBLY." Hollyleaf yells.
"What's going on?" a blonde guy questions and I run. And trip over my shoelace smacking into a locker. The boy catches up, and offers me his hand.
"Thanks, what do you want" I badgered.
"Well I'm Lionblaze and my friends call me Lion. You?" Lionblaze answers
"Cinderheart. Walk me back to my room." I answered.
The next day we got our schedules
A1 language arts
A2 math
A3 science
Homeroom
A4 music
B1 history
B2 free block
B3 basic healing
Homeroom
B4 gym
Then I jump as the morning announcements come on. We started with a B-day. It goes by like a breeze, then eventually in gym.
"Can I get water please" I asked the gym teacher.
"In the hall" he answered. I get water.
"THIS HURTS" Lionblaze yells.
"Lion?" I question. He opens the boys locker room door that's in the hall. He sits on a bench.
"Is there a first aid kit?" I ask and he nods at the desk I grab it.
"Where's the pain at?" Lionblaze then lifts the side of his shirt and then he lifts his shirt off so it's easier to wrap the gauze around the wound. He then kisses me. Heathertail is in the hall she sees us because the door was open.
"Lion..." she trails off.
uh oh. Love triangle. Girls are dramatic sometimes and so are guys. Please let me know what you thought about this.