Hey there sorry I had to delete for your own good, I just don't think it would have been very good, so instead I decided to go back to the most traditional love story in the history of the world!

The story will be based in the golden age and in prince Caspian , but at the same time in an AU, if you understand what I mean, if you don't it will make sense in the story note is that Caspian is not hated by Miraz in this story, but you will probably figure that out too.

Ages:

Susan, 16

Peter,18

Caspian,18

Edmund, 14

Lucy, 12

Hope you enjoy my take on Romeo and Juliette.

Basically just a character description, but if I get enough review I should be able to update soon.

In the land of Narnia is where we set our scene, a young queen looks helplessly out of her white marble balcony. Her pure skin almost as white as the marble itself, her hair blowing softly in the breeze of the sea underneath her balcony. Her blue eyes staring into the salted waters. Queen Susan was one of the most beautiful women in the kingdom, one of her brothers the high king, the other yet another king and her sister so sweet and young also a queen just like herself. They all had a special purpose in life. Peter ruled everything, Edmund was taking rule of the army and Lucy was the healer of all. If only she could heel Susan's heart.

Susan loved the life of a queen, yet her only purpose seemed to be to marry a king. She had seen so many suitors she could not count on both if her soft porcelain Susan wasn't delicate, her skills with a bow and arrow were amazing, yet she hadn't even touched her bow in weeks let alone shot on target.

Susan turned suddenly as she saw her brother burst through her door she saw the anger in his blue eyes that matched hers, at first she thought he would be angry at her for turning down yet another suitor but soon she realised what was really wrong with him, the telmarines. They had been feuding with them for all of Susan's life.

Peter sat on her bed as she walked slowly towards him and braced herself for how much he was going to rant about the telmarines, as much as she loved her brother, he was overacting slightly, yes they had been disputes in the past but they could just let it go. But Susan stayed silent and listened to her brother as he began,

"Those telmarines have been threatening to invade the East yet again, I wish they would just stop invading us."

Peter put his head in his hands in despair, Susan put her arms around him comforting her.

Peter sat up and smiled at Susan,

"I hope they don't invade tomorrow."

Susan frowned slightly, tomorrow was her coming out ball she was not looking forward to turning sixteen, not the age itself it is all that came with it, marriage would be set on the table even harder, she did not want to marry someone she did not love, she had read all the romance novels she wanted to fall in love not just get married.

Peter noticed her frown and said,

"Cheer up dear sister, with your beautiful face I'll have to fight off suitors."

Susan kept her fake smile up as he left the room and then walked out onto her balcony to stare out onto the sea.

O Romeo, Romeo! wherefore art thou Romeo?

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