Disclaimer: In case you didn't know, Naruto isn't mine, got it memorized?
I would like to thank iamsarcasm for being the spazztastic editor of my first chapter.
You have been an extremely big help. From uchiwasasuke79 to iamsarcasm thank you.
Revision Note: I was never happy with my first chapter, but didn't do anything to change it, until I read a story that was rewritten, and it was phenomenal. One of the best stories I ever read on this site to be precise. The point is, the story inspired me to finally rewrite my first chapter, so I did. Now its longer. Still begins at the same point in time, still ends at the same point in time. I just changed/added a few things. The changes have nothing to do with original story, so if you already read it once, you don't have to again. The parts that did deal with the original plot, I kept, maybe reworded if that, but kept. Also I gave the story another name and summary. I'm ashamed to say, My Sasuke Fanfict honestly, was the best title I could think of at the time.
Chapter 5 will be up soon.
With all a do, here's the revised, the better, chapter 1.
High School, A Sasuke Uchiha Fanfict
Chapter 1: Enter Sasuke Uchiha
Today was the day. The first day of high school. Anyone can tell you, high school is full of new friends and new beginnings. And everyone's favorite Uchiha, was about to sleep-in and miss the magic, that is high school.
"Wake-up sleepy head," a calm voice spoke from across the room, leaning slightly on the door, "it's almost time for school. You don't wanna be late for your first day of the new school year now do you?"
Sasuke was still tightly wrapped in his covers. He was off in some far off dream of his; something about being a vampire hunter who must rid the town of the evil blood sucking devils.
"Okay, if that's the way you want it. Maybe I'll have a little fun," Itachi wondered.
Itachi crept his way over to Sasuke, whispering something in his ear.
"Sasuke, I'm going to kill you just like I killed your parents,"
"NO!! Mother, father, shouldn't have died. I can never forgive you for this. Your time's up demon. Prepare to die. Away with with you! Now DIE!!"
Sasuke exploded from his covers and kicked Itachi in the chin, where Sasuke's foot remained for a good three seconds.
"Take that! Lions Barrage!"
Strangely enough, Itachi didn't even flinch. He was lost in thought, whether Sasuke was still sleep or awake. The whole thing seemed a little rehearsed to Itachi. No matter he thought.
Itachi grabbed Sasuke's foot with one hand, and threw Sasuke half way across the room.
"Mother, father, I failed you," Sasuke managed to whisper before his eye lids sprung open. His eyes were red now. His eyes only turned red when his sleep was interrupted or he was extremely pissed off beyond belief.
"Wha...What? Itachi when did you get in here?"
"That doesn't matter, get ready for school,"
"Or what?"
"I'll kick you out that's what,"
"Oh, by the way you say it, I just might. Who knows? Maybe I'll end up some place better than this dump."
"Maybe you should leave,"
"Don't tempt me,"
"If you do choose to leave, I won't stop you. But for now get dressed."
"Fine. We'll have it your way. What time is it anyway?"
"If your late, I'll have you walk to school."
"That's nice, but what time is it?"
Sasuke gazed around his room looking for his alarm clock. The alarm clock read 6:48 a.m.
"That late?"
Sasuke grabbed his towel from off the floor. When he lifted his head up, he saw Itachi in the hallway pointing to the shower.
"Yeah, yeah. I know where the shower is. I wasn't born yesterday ya know."
Sasuke briefly exchanged looks with Itachi exiting his room. Sasuke was one step from the bathroom when Itachi called Sasuke.
"Hey Sasuke," Itachi's voice made Sasuke freeze in his tracks. "I have a problem for you. A boy wakes up at 6:43 a.m., the bus comes at 6:56 a.m., give or take a minute or two. Currently, the time is 6:49 a.m. If the said boy misses the bus, he can run the 3½ miles to school, which starts at 7:20 a.m. To make matters worst, said boy decides to delegate with someone clearly devoted on ensuring said boy misses the bus. What do you think said boy should do, Sasuke?"
"Is that really the best you could come up with?"
"Give me a break, I'm having a slow day."
"Whatever," Sasuke said before slamming the door to the bathroom.
Psssstt Sasuke turned on the water in the shower.
Back off, I'll you on. Headstrong to take on anyone. I know that you are wrong. Headstrong, for headstrong.
"Sasuke stop singing in the shower again!" Itachi called upstairs.
"Make me!" Sasuke roared.
"So it begins," A smirk flew across Itachi's sinister face.
Pain, without love. Pain, can't get enough. Pain, I like it rough cause I rather feel pain than nothing at al...
"Ahh!! It's cold! Itachi!! Stop it!" Sasuke howled.
Itachi was downstairs flushing the toilet over and over again. Sasuke's screams only added to Itachi's satisfaction.
"What's wrong Sasuke?!" Itachi called the up the stairs as if he didn't already know what was wrong.
After that, Itachi went into the kitchen to make Sasuke's lunch and coffee. Itachi packed Sasuke the last piece of a special cake that Itachi made last weekend in the kitchen for hours. Itachi wanted to eat the cake himself, but decided to give it to Sasuke anyway. Last but not least, to complete Sasuke's lunch, the beverage. Itachi pulled out a bottle of cherry flavored water from the fridge (refrigerator). Itachi then placed his coffee and Sasuke's lunch on the table.
Sasuke came down the stairs clean and fully dressed. He was wearing is favorite outfit, composed of navy blue jeans and his black striped sky blue polo shirt.
"Sasuke, how was your shower?" Itachi couldn't help but let out a small chuckle as he took a sip of coffee. "Shouldn't you be heading off to the bus now?"
"Well, I could. But your efforts to delay me failed. I've actually saved about a minute to spare. You see now Itachi? You can't outsmart me."
"So sure are we? Oh yeah, one other thing I forgot to tell you. The bus stop is now at the end of the block past you-know-who's-house, no longer in front of out house. I imagine the bus will be there any moment know."
"Crap," Sasuke grabbed his lunch from the table and headed out the door, but came back in almost immediately.
"Hey Itachi,"
"Yes," Itachi replied before taking another long sip of coffee.
"Drink up."
"What?"
Sasuke struck the bottom of Itachi's cup upward, spilling hot coffee all over Itachi's face and clothes.
"SASUKE!!" Itachi roared erupting from his seat.
"Gotta go," Sasuke ran for dear life slamming through the door.
"Now where's that bus?" Looking both ways, Sasuke could spot the bus on his left in the far off distance.
'Catch the bus or not to catch the bus?' Sasuke thought, 'I don't feel like walking to school today, so what the heck?'
In a race with the bus, Sasuke sprinted rapidly down the block, trying to beat the bus four houses down to the right. With the bus approaching rapidly, Sasuke could not afford to let up his speed for a second, but that didn't keep his mind from wandering.
'Stupid Itachi. And not tellin' me and stuffs. I can hear him mocking me. Sasuke. Sasuke. Sasuke. Sasuke. '
"Sasuke,"
"Itachi," Sasuke turned around to see that Itachi was not there. Only a small wiener dog. "Leave wiener dog, or else."
The wiener dog nodded like it understood word for word exactly what Sasuke had said. But then again, looks can be deceiving. The wiener dog designated Sasuke as it's territory and peed on Sasuke pants. Then scurried away into some bushes.
"This is why I don't own an animal. They're all pee-in everywhere. And always need food. Too much work. Wow, had a little Shikamaru moment there. Creepy." Sasuke hissed under his breath.
Sasuke started back up on his sprint and like before, his mind started to wander.
'Stupid Itachi. Stupid dog. Could this day get any worse?"
"HEY SASUKE!!" Sasuke almost tripped at Ino's sudden outburst. She was just leaving her house and for that matter, still on her porch.
'Stupid girl.'
"I'm, like so glad were going to the same high school! Wait Sasuke, slow down, the bus doesn't come until seven. My watch says that's about another four minutes."
Sasuke was so use to ignoring whatever the crap Ino had to say, because she was always so loud and high maintenance, he almost didn't hear her. However, he did, and came to an almost instant halt.
"Wait, what did you say?! If it doesn't come for another four minutes what bus is that over there." Sasuke pointed to his right.
"What bus? I don't see anything."
"What do you mean what bus?" Sasuke took a moment to actually look in the direction he pointed to, "It was right over there...hmph it must have turned the corner. That Itachi, must have been one of his tricks to get me out the house. How do I keep falling for these stupid things? Give me a jump suit and call me Naruto."
"What's that your mumbling?!"
"Nothing, just forget about it."
Sasuke was now at the bus stop waiting impatiently for the real bus to come, alone, with Ino.
"Sasuke, strange you said you saw a bus, I always thought you had very good eyes."
"Stop hugging me already,"
"Sakura is going to be so jealous when I tell her I share a bus stop with Sasuke. I mean, what girl wouldn't, you look so cute."
Ino reached over to pinch Sasuke's cheeks (not butt). But Sasuke gently pushed her hand away.
"Don't touch the cheeks,"
"Awe! Even when your mad your just so cute."
"I'm not cute, I'm rugged."
"Call it what you wish, but cute is cute."
The bus was in distance, approaching fast.
"Hey Sasuke, do you think I could sit next to you on the bus?"
"Leave me alone." Now at the corner, Sasuke couldn't help but tune-out Ino. He got what he needed to know from her, and wanted nothing more to do with her.
"But Sasuke...I just wanted to ..."
To make Ino shut-up, Sasuke did an Itachi move, and made Ino think.
"Hey Ino,"
"Yes Sasuke, anything?"
"Ino, what is it that makes you think you have a shot with me?" the bus pulled up. "Can you honestly say you see a healthy future with me?"
"..."
"Hey Sasuke, there's Sakura. Smile."
'What's with this girl?'
"Hey kid, you on this bus?"
"Sadly,"
Did you like it or not? Commentary of all kinds is accepted. Please review. I like reading your reviews. If there's is something I need to work on, let me know. If you read the original, please leave a review about the rewrite.
The first song was Headstrong by Trapt, the second song was Pain by Three Days Grace. The reference far off distance is the translation for the Naruto season 2 or 3 opening theme song, Haruka Kanata (I think it's season 2 in japan and season 3 in america)
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