My friend told me that writing a story about a show caled "fanfiction" and it is a website for "fanfiction" caled '' Then we have stories of our msg bored, it will post here : D. I am not first, in English, please do not forget. But I am here to help me make beter English to with sharing :3
she said I make beter english then she though.
I took out lyrics to make good with rules. Sorry if sounds strage ) :
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The group was caled the 'flower of lithim' and the music they play sothingly floated in the room. They played music that was cool, and it floated into the room in a way that makes people happy dance. It was an cold night and the night the moon was round. The girl with black hair set up the microphone to her face. Her espression serene, except her feelings.
"Soul meet body chorus"
Music in the blood of the microphone. She has a nice voice and it shone like the moonlight on the window. She wrote the song when she was thinking about who she was in love with was death. he had died of cancer this year. He told her he loved her too, but she had to go on how she wrote the song to show him how she felt more.
"Tomo, you have to continue." The raven-hiared boy says and took her hand to shake.
"But I do not ... if you're beter?" She cried with tears in her eyes.
"I'll try, but if I die, you die. Promise me you will live." He joined both his hand and his head tipped to side smilieing the with his big brown eyes.
"I promise. But you will get beter, I know." vio'ja said in a loud voice.
But it did not, it had worsed. It was very bad at the end. It was so painful that Tomo had written this song about how she wishes she wishes she could died too. After day she renamed hersef 'Vio'ja' she didn't want any person but him to call her real name again ever. She chose Vio'ja because her eyes, one violette one jad.
"last line of song"
"last lien of song"
They had just completelie the song and floating music began to fade.
"Great job vio'ja. The girl next who plays the guitar said. She was dressed like a rocker with blue jeans and a shirt.
"You have to Osaka." vio'ja said and shook her hiar jet. She pulled her leather jacket and sighed. her skirt was to knees and prurple. Her eyes jad and violetter made a flash of unease.
"It makes you still sad?" Yomi said from the battery set. Her contacts from her eyes bright aqua.
"I agree ..." vio'ja and huged hersef.
"HEY YOU GUYS! said an audence girl." I found the crowd loved you. They will pay double. "She said with a laugh.
vio'ja resum her little sister and twirled.
"It's great Chiyo!" The singer said to the girl in ponietails.
"Of course they are, I am simple very good." A girl with long long crow hair said and droped her base on stage.
"Sakaki offer beter care for your instrumentals." vio'ja said, smilieing anyway.
"I think Sakaki is still mad we replaced her with vio'ja, it must be low." Yomi whispered to Osaka.
"I know, but do not tell vio'ja, Yomi. It would be sad. "Osaka whspered back.
"Why are you whispering?" Chiyo asked suddenlie curious.
"We arn't!" Said together.
"Well, I'm going to get pay!" Said vio'ja and fled into the crowd.
Sakaki and snarled at the sene sulkily.
"I'll be the new singer." she watched vio'ja dissapear to the crowd like curlie smoke.