This is my brother's first fanfiction story and I am going to be posting all of the chapters he writes on my account, and later he is going to post everything on his own account, but we want some feedback before he does that so…. R&R!
Rrrrrrrrrrring! the final class period ends and Bella is still not happy.
Like always Bella goes to the local Casino in town and gambles all of Jacob's money.
While Bella enters the Martin Casino she realizes that she only has one hundred dollars to gamble.
Bella ran to Edward as fast she could but it was to late Edward already used his million dollar allowance.
Bella starts crying on Edwards shoulder all depressed.
"Bella why are you crying".
"I don't know maybe it's because you became selfish and gave your million $ on a charity and not me".
"I could have won you two million dollars if you gave me that money".
"Really how"
"At the new Casino they opened up two days ago".
"didn't you say that yesterday".
"What's your point"
"Your getting way to addicted to gambling"
"Does that mean you'll give me a million dollars"?
"No I won't god go to Jacob or something".
"Fine I will".
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" Hi Jake what are you doing".
"Just the usual washing my car shirtless like always, oh no I got my six pack all wet ".
" Jacob I know your trying to get me to like you more than Edward but it's not working, Edward's great" Then in hushed tone she said "except for the fact he won't give me a million dollars".
"Come on It took me a whole year to get these biceps just for I even wrote this poem for you Roses are red violets are blue"…..
While Jacob reads his annoying poem, Bella thinks " How do I get rid of this stoker? Huh?"
Bella gets an idea and texts Edward. " be at Jacob's house in twenty two seconds exactly".
Bella looks back at Jacob and interrupts his poem. "That was a beautiful poem".
Jacob says "thanks" and before could say anything else Bella kisses him for ten seconds.
She see's Edward arriving and says to Jacob "why did you kiss".
Bella slaps him and says "Edward is my boyfriend you stoker".
Jacob confused gets ambushed by Edward and says "nobody kisses my girl".
Edward looks at Jacob and rips his head right off his body.
Bella looks at Jacob's pocket and finds his credit card.
Edward says "good riddance".
Edward Turns to Bella and says "I made a poem while I came here". " Roses are red violets are blue"…..
Bella says "Edward I need to tell you a secret?
"Ya"
" I never liked you. I only loved your money sorry Edward, now if you don't mind I need to find the nearest ATM machine."
Edward takes the credit card from Bella's hand and smashes it in little pieces.
Bella turns back and says " I love you Edward" and slowly takes his credit cards and runs away.
So please tell me what you thought of it! Any ideas for what the other cullen's addictions should be?