Danny's POV
"Hey Danny, haven't you noticed Walker hasn't showed up in while?" said Tucker. "Yeah. I wonder what he's up to..." I said. "Danny, if anything he's probably plotting against you." said Sam. "Yeah, but I should probably take my mind off this and play some mindless video games when I get home!" I said.
The bell rang and everyone waiting at the school doors flooded out. "Finally, school's finally over 'till Monday!" said Tucker. "Joy. Now that gives my parents more time to chase me to try on ridiculous outfits" said Sam. "It can't be that bad." I said. They continued to walk down the sidewalk. They passed Sam's house and looked up at it. "Sammy! Come upstairs! I have something you're going to liiiiiiiiike." Said Sam's mom. "All the more reason to run." Said Sam. Sam's mom hung a sparkling pink dress with diamonds on it out the window. "Sweetie, just try it on!" said her mom. "Well see you on Monday." Said Sam. She reluctantly walked up to the door and walked inside. Danny and Tucker heard running inside and stuff falling over. "Poor Sam, doomed to another weekend of dress-up." I said.
Danny and Tucker continued walking down the side of the street. A car came speeding by and splashed murky water on Danny. "Is it me, or are you always unlucky?" said Tucker. "Shut up Tuck." I said. We walked into my house and ran straight into the ghost gabber. "Try it again Danny, this time I think it'll work." Said my dad Jack Fenton. "Honey that's still broken, why can't you accept that?" said my mom Maddie Fenton. I walked past it and up to my room with Tucker. I pressed the power button on my SuperPyramid360. Tucker and I started fighting eachother on the game. I was winning, but then Tucker punched me and I lost one of my lives. "You're going to pay for tha-" I stopped talking and noticed two girls standing in my room. "Hi, can I play?" said the first one. "What game are you playing?" said the second one. "Uh, Power Pound 2." I said. "Sweet! Sounds like fun." Said the first one. "How'd you get in here?" I said. "I'm the creator of this fanfic, I'm Stefanie and she's my friend Hallie" said Stefanie. "Oh well, than nice to meet you." I said. She started playing and was beating Tucker and I. Then Hallie joined in. "This is fun!" Said Hallie. I continued to watch my character fly across the screen and lose a life. "Man, you're both good at this." Said Tucker. "Thanks, but I have to let the fanfic continue its course." Said Stefanie. "Yeah, Thank you!" Said Hallie. Then, she and Hallie disappeared. "That was weird." Said Tucker. "And this is weirder." I said as I watched my ghost sense go off. "Normally, I'd hear screams outside and a ghost would burst through my wall." I said suspicious. Then I heard Paulina screaming outside and a ghost burst through my wall. "See! I knew it was coming as soon as I said that." I shouted. The ghost then shot me with an ectoplasmic energy blast and my vision went black.
End of 1st Chapter Sorry 'bout the Cliff Hanger... I NEED AT LEAST FIVE REVIEWS UNTIL I POST ANOTHER CHAPTER. AND THE REVIEWS HAVE TO BE FROM DIFFERENT PEOPLE! Oh, and tell me how much my first story sucked. THANK YOU!