Hello! This is my first fanfiction so I am open to all critism and reviews.
It was a beautiful summer day as Hashirama walked to Madara's house. Because Madara had requested him there. "Hello?" Hashirama stood in the doorway of the large mansion. "welcome." a deep and overwhelming voice called back. Hashirama then stepped inside and all the candles lite at once, and in the main room ahead of Hashirama was Madara. "Hello Madara." "Welcome Hashirama." Madara glanced at Hashirama. "So I hear that your son will be born soon, Hashirama." Hashirama nodded. "What's his name...?" Madara pleasantly asked. "Naruto, Naruto Senju." Madara chuckled. "And who's the mother?". Hashirama swallowed, "Nizumi... Nizumi Senju.". Madara laughed with a evil tone. "So. Your not the only one with a son due to be born... Hashirama." Hashirama tilted his head in confusion, "What?" Madara snickered. "You see Hashirama, I also am due to have a child...!" Hashirama was shocked, surpised, and happy for Madara. "well. What's your son's name gonna be, Madara?" Madara smiled, "Sasuke Uchiha.". Hashirama was so shocked he didn't bother to ask who the mother was. Madara laughed at Hashirama once again. "I see your surprised. So I'll just tell you who the mother is. Her name... is Kuroda Uchiha." Hashirama's sweat dropped. "Who could fall in love with such a ill-tempered and powerful woman?" he thought to himself when suddenly Madara slapped him on the shoulder. "Well Hashirama. I hope you and your child live happy lives." "Same to you Madara.". Madara just chuckled and sat back down in his seat. "well good-bye Hashirama." "Good-bye." Hashirama replied as he left the mansion when suddenly the two doors slammed shut behind him. "God I hate when he does that..."
Several months later
Hashirama stood in the hospital room next to his wife as she held their new-born child. "Well," Nizumi smiled, "He definitely has your eyes Hashirama" Hashirama laughed "You think so?" When suddenly Madara came in the room holding a small new-born child. Hashirama looked to Madara and said "Well now, who'd you steal this cute thing from?" Madara laughed. "I didn't steal him. He's my son." then suddenly madara had a very sad look upon his face. "But unfortunately.. his mother died giving birth.". At this both hashirama and Nizumi gasp and a new-born Naruto began to cry. Then Madara had a very serious look on his face, "But Hashirama I fear our childern will become rivals and one of them will turn to the darkness for help. "At this point Hashirama had a very grave expression on his face, "So who do you think is gonna turn to the darkness?" Madara looked up at Hashirama and said, "I think it will be Sasuke.".
Two years later
Hashirama and Madara stood on the side of the road to make sure that their children didn't run off. When suddenly Madara spoke, "Well Hashirama I think it's almost time to begin their training as ninja's. Don't you agree?" Hashirama looked Madara in the eye and nodded. Madara was very pleased but still something was getting under his skin. Something he couldn't quite shake. But what?
Three years later
The boys had gone over well with almost all their training to be shinobi in three years. As Naruto and Sasuke clashed on the training feild under the watchful eyes of Hashirama and Madara. Suddenly as Naruto and Sasuke fought, Sasuke threw some Shuriken at Naruto's foot. Naruto then dodged and stuck his tongue out only to get a kunai knive in his foot. Madara was pleased with Sasuke's tactic while Hashirama frantically tried to stop the bleeding from Naruto's foot. Sasuke then spoke-up, "well. The blonde ramen noodle has gotten himself hurt again." And Naruto angrily replied, "Well atleast I ain't got a cactus for hair". Sasuke's eye twitched slightly out of annoyance. "I dare you to repeat that" Naruto then said it louder, "ATLEAST I AIN'T GOT A CACTUS FOR HAIR!". Sasuke eye twitched even more and not long after Naruto had a large lump on his head with the mark of a fist on it. While Hashirama's sweat dropped Madara started laughing at the two children that reminded him of himself and Hashirama when they were children.
two years later
Naruto and Sasuke had been sent on their first mission, to find a lost cat. While Sasuke did the planning, Naruto did the hard physical work of capturing the cat. And the two pulled it off perfectly. They completed so many missions the were assigned their first D -rank mission. Escort the Boat sales-man to the land of Waves. And since they had to have a minimum of four people to preform the mission, Madara and Hashirama tagged along as the jonin for the mission. As they walked to the land of Waves They were jumped by thugs. "Give us your money, better yet! All your belongings!" Madara just chuckled as the thug caught ablaze. "Fire Style: Blazing Inferno!" The thugs body suddenly exploded in to a complete combustion. While the other thugs either aimed at Naruto and Sasuke or Hashirama. "Damn! There's to many of these fucking bastards" Screamed Naruto. Madara chuckled. "It's time! Fire Style: Volcanic Eruption!" Suddenly Madara shot a blaze of fire from the palms of his hands and Incinerated most if not everything with-in range. "Well. Let's go" Madara said with a smile. The two boys were scared out of their minds and Hashirama's sweat dropped but they continued.