Twilights not mine and it never will be.
Seem to have a weird obsession with New Moon at the mo, o well it is my favourite. This is my 2nd FF and most common advice from the first was to make it longer, so here goes.
Chapter 1 So close
Bella POV
As I broke free from the crowd I saw him, I saw his beautiful face, his bare muscular chest and my favourite jumper in a heap next to him. It was going to be fine, in just a few seconds I was going to get to him and pull him into the shadows, and we were going to be safe. My pace slowed as I imagined our embrace, he didn't love me anymore but surely he'd hug me. But then my vision disappeared as my view of Edward did. Suddenly a pair of hands was wrenching him out of my sight and into a dark secluded alley. Those few seconds I had estimated my journey to take were more painful than anything I had ever felt before, even worse than the hole in my chest caused by the absence of him. Because he had at least still been somewhere, right now I knew he was gone. But then a second shadow slid into the alley, Alice. There was no way tiny Alice could possibly fight off the unstoppable monsters Edward had warned me about. I didn't blame her, I too fully intended to run into that alley and risk my life for undoubtedly the most beautiful being in the universe. But I knew that by the time I got there the fight would be over and I would be alone.
Edward POV
I didn't fight against them; this was after all the point of my plan. There was one detail I hadn't planned on though. I had expected Alice to come, she's too fierce a friend to let me go, but I didn't expect the friend she brought too. Especially seen as I thought she was dead. But she was alive, and she had come to save me, this made me happier than I had been in months. That happiness soon disappeared though, I was going to die now, fair enough, but Alice was fighting too, and that left my Bella all alone in a city full of vampires. O god. "Alice how could you bring her" I snarled as she slipped beside me in the alley to face our opponents and she squeezed my arm. 'What could I do?' she thought 'she'd never have let me leave her behind, and you wouldn't have believed me'. She was right, but I still didn't forgive her. "Then why is she racing over here, only to find us both dead and herself alone in a city full of vampires?" That wasn't my main concern though, I knew it was selfish but the thought of there being a Bella without me was excruciating. I had left her but part of me knew I'd go back, I'd never be able to go back to her now. Alice's thoughts were so pained that they pulled me out of my thoughts, so it wasn't just me that was suffering. 'I couldn't leave you Edward, I'm so sorry but I couldn't. I gave her my phone, Jasper will ring later. She'll be fine. I turned to the men opposite us, they were trying to understand what we were talking about but it was difficult when you could only hear one side of a conversation. But that was good, the less they knew about Bella the safer she was. "Let's make this quick boys", and I stepped in front of Alice," go now, grab Bella and leave" I whispered behind me. Alice just shook her head. 'Jasper's going to kill me' she thought. I grimaced, he won't get the chance.
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