hey, I'm manly writting this for my self because I'm bored out of my skull.
So if u think it sucks well thats get to damn bad (j/k i luv reading
flames). I do NOT do lemons so if your that kind of person leave now. This
is not going to be no 23 chapter deal unless thats what the people want. Oh
and sorry in advance for short chapters. If you want to ask me anything
review or e-mail me/msn at Valdrein@hotmail.com
I will not abandon my story, I will post as offten as I can.
"talking" 'thinking'
pretty streight forward i think, i'm sorry for spelling mistakes, i will try my best to get the names and weapons right :D Well on with the story
Chapter One
"Inuyasha!" Kagome sceamed "Naraku has the jewel"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Flash Back~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The group was just walking though the forest when Inuyasha just stopped dead in his tracks.
"what is it Inu" but Kagome was cut off by Inuyasha's hand placed over her mouth. 'his hands are so strong and gental' but her thoughs were interuped by a tree crashing in the forest ahead of them.
"What is it Inuyasha?" miroku questioned
"Its him" Inuyasha didn't need to say any more. Sango already had her boomarang out and Kagome with her bow and arrows was ready to attack.
'I sense the jewel shards now, I'm such an idot!, why didn't I'
Kagome's thoughs were interupted again by the miasma that was starting to thickin around them. Miroku could see the pain on Sango's face from her body trying to fight of the poision. He wanted to tell her to leave but he knew better by now, she would not miss her chance to get back at Naraku for what he did to her family or village.
Inuyasha could see Narku's outline through the miasma, he was comin closer. Inuyasha gipped the hilt of his Tetsusaiga, he turned to take a quick look at Kagome to see how she was handling the poisin as it was starting to thickin. She stood tall and had an arrow aimed at Naraku ready for Inuyasha to give her the signal to shoot. He would have cheeked Sango but he knew that Miroku would have already checked. Knowing that everyone was ready he took out his sword and charged at Naraku.
Kagome was ready to shoot but at the last second she relaxed the string on the bow, still holding on to her arrow. 'It doesn't add up' she though 'If this is Naraku how come the shards I sense are coming from a different direction'
"Inuyasha wait!" but it was to late, Inuyasha had charged at the fake head on.
"What the hell" Inuyasha had taken the head clean off the Naraku before him but..........it was to easy.
Miroku and Sango stood in shock, for they, along with Inuyasha though that that was indeed Naraku, they were preparing for a long, hard, drug out battle, but it had ended with one swing?
"Inuyasha!" Kagome yelled "That wasn't Naraku, it was just a puppet the re"
"Oh course that wasn't Naraku!" yelled Inuyasha cutting Kagome off "Do you think I'm that stupid to believe that it was going to be that easy"
"Will you be quite and let me finish, that was a fake but the real Naraku is still here!"
The anger on Inuyasha's face quickly faded and was replaced with a look of shock. 'well that got his attention' though Kagome.
Inuyasha turned to head back to the others but the puppet was not done just yet. Sango was the first to notice the puppet move because the others were busy trying to locate Naraku.
"Inuyasha behind you!" Sango yelled but the warning came to late. The puppet which took the form of a giant plant had taken a hold of Inuyasha and was rapped around him just under his arms.
"Get off of me you over grown weed!" Inuyasha tryed to fight back but something was wrong. 'what is this thing, i feel myself getting weaker, this plant must be draning my energy' Inuyasha's movements begain to slow down and his eyes begain to close. Kagome went to run to Inuyasha but Miroku held her back knowing that the plant would most likely try to drain her energy as well. Sango threw her giant boomarang and the tentical that was holding Inuyasha. The weapon hit its mark.
"Kirara!" Sango jumped on to the fire cat and caught Inuyasha before he hit the ground. Miroku knowing that the plant was now dead caused to the loss of one of its vital tenticals, let Kagome free. Kagome had put up quit a fight so he was more then happy to give his body a rest.
"Inuyasha.....Inuyasha?" Kagome wispered softly into his ear. He ear gave a little twitch and his eyes slowly opened. 'thank god' Kagome sighed to herself.
"HAHAHA, stupid half breed, I should have known that you would be the one to foolishly attack my puppet" the sinaster voice belonged to Naraku.
"Na.....Naraku!" Inuyasha was still feeling weak from having his enery drained but he wouldn't give Naraku the satisfaction of knowing.
"Ha ha ha ha, now that the guard dog is takin care of I'm free to take the rest of the jewel" a smile could be seen under the baboon pelt.
'The jewel.....no' Inuyasha's heart was raceing, he had to get to her "KAGOME RUN!!!!"
Miroku was the closest to Kagome and tried to get between her and Naraku but Naraku threw the monk into the trunk of a near by tree. Seeing his friend down and the women he cared for in trouble Inuyasha toke all of the strengh he had left and ran to sheld Kagome anyway he could, but Naraku grabed her first. He pulled her up in to the sky and grabed the jewel that hung around her neck.
"Sense it was your effort that gathered all these jewel shards I will give you and your half breed the pleasure of being killed by my full demon form" and with that Naraku let her fall into the waiting arms of Inuyasha.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~End Flash Back~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Comments: so yeah, thats the first chapter, i would luv to get some reviews, i would rather bad stuff then nothing at all to be honest. If there is something you want or a character to be writen in plz say something. If i'm spelling something wrong an dit bugs u tell me k. I will update soon even if you don't like :D. I will not add lemons but i'm pretty open to anyting else, oh but no Sess/Rin things, to me thats like sleeping with your dad.
I will not abandon my story, I will post as offten as I can.
"talking" 'thinking'
pretty streight forward i think, i'm sorry for spelling mistakes, i will try my best to get the names and weapons right :D Well on with the story
Chapter One
"Inuyasha!" Kagome sceamed "Naraku has the jewel"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Flash Back~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The group was just walking though the forest when Inuyasha just stopped dead in his tracks.
"what is it Inu" but Kagome was cut off by Inuyasha's hand placed over her mouth. 'his hands are so strong and gental' but her thoughs were interuped by a tree crashing in the forest ahead of them.
"What is it Inuyasha?" miroku questioned
"Its him" Inuyasha didn't need to say any more. Sango already had her boomarang out and Kagome with her bow and arrows was ready to attack.
'I sense the jewel shards now, I'm such an idot!, why didn't I'
Kagome's thoughs were interupted again by the miasma that was starting to thickin around them. Miroku could see the pain on Sango's face from her body trying to fight of the poision. He wanted to tell her to leave but he knew better by now, she would not miss her chance to get back at Naraku for what he did to her family or village.
Inuyasha could see Narku's outline through the miasma, he was comin closer. Inuyasha gipped the hilt of his Tetsusaiga, he turned to take a quick look at Kagome to see how she was handling the poisin as it was starting to thickin. She stood tall and had an arrow aimed at Naraku ready for Inuyasha to give her the signal to shoot. He would have cheeked Sango but he knew that Miroku would have already checked. Knowing that everyone was ready he took out his sword and charged at Naraku.
Kagome was ready to shoot but at the last second she relaxed the string on the bow, still holding on to her arrow. 'It doesn't add up' she though 'If this is Naraku how come the shards I sense are coming from a different direction'
"Inuyasha wait!" but it was to late, Inuyasha had charged at the fake head on.
"What the hell" Inuyasha had taken the head clean off the Naraku before him but..........it was to easy.
Miroku and Sango stood in shock, for they, along with Inuyasha though that that was indeed Naraku, they were preparing for a long, hard, drug out battle, but it had ended with one swing?
"Inuyasha!" Kagome yelled "That wasn't Naraku, it was just a puppet the re"
"Oh course that wasn't Naraku!" yelled Inuyasha cutting Kagome off "Do you think I'm that stupid to believe that it was going to be that easy"
"Will you be quite and let me finish, that was a fake but the real Naraku is still here!"
The anger on Inuyasha's face quickly faded and was replaced with a look of shock. 'well that got his attention' though Kagome.
Inuyasha turned to head back to the others but the puppet was not done just yet. Sango was the first to notice the puppet move because the others were busy trying to locate Naraku.
"Inuyasha behind you!" Sango yelled but the warning came to late. The puppet which took the form of a giant plant had taken a hold of Inuyasha and was rapped around him just under his arms.
"Get off of me you over grown weed!" Inuyasha tryed to fight back but something was wrong. 'what is this thing, i feel myself getting weaker, this plant must be draning my energy' Inuyasha's movements begain to slow down and his eyes begain to close. Kagome went to run to Inuyasha but Miroku held her back knowing that the plant would most likely try to drain her energy as well. Sango threw her giant boomarang and the tentical that was holding Inuyasha. The weapon hit its mark.
"Kirara!" Sango jumped on to the fire cat and caught Inuyasha before he hit the ground. Miroku knowing that the plant was now dead caused to the loss of one of its vital tenticals, let Kagome free. Kagome had put up quit a fight so he was more then happy to give his body a rest.
"Inuyasha.....Inuyasha?" Kagome wispered softly into his ear. He ear gave a little twitch and his eyes slowly opened. 'thank god' Kagome sighed to herself.
"HAHAHA, stupid half breed, I should have known that you would be the one to foolishly attack my puppet" the sinaster voice belonged to Naraku.
"Na.....Naraku!" Inuyasha was still feeling weak from having his enery drained but he wouldn't give Naraku the satisfaction of knowing.
"Ha ha ha ha, now that the guard dog is takin care of I'm free to take the rest of the jewel" a smile could be seen under the baboon pelt.
'The jewel.....no' Inuyasha's heart was raceing, he had to get to her "KAGOME RUN!!!!"
Miroku was the closest to Kagome and tried to get between her and Naraku but Naraku threw the monk into the trunk of a near by tree. Seeing his friend down and the women he cared for in trouble Inuyasha toke all of the strengh he had left and ran to sheld Kagome anyway he could, but Naraku grabed her first. He pulled her up in to the sky and grabed the jewel that hung around her neck.
"Sense it was your effort that gathered all these jewel shards I will give you and your half breed the pleasure of being killed by my full demon form" and with that Naraku let her fall into the waiting arms of Inuyasha.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~End Flash Back~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Comments: so yeah, thats the first chapter, i would luv to get some reviews, i would rather bad stuff then nothing at all to be honest. If there is something you want or a character to be writen in plz say something. If i'm spelling something wrong an dit bugs u tell me k. I will update soon even if you don't like :D. I will not add lemons but i'm pretty open to anyting else, oh but no Sess/Rin things, to me thats like sleeping with your dad.