I'm trying to work on actually finishing a fan fiction, so I need feedback people. I kind of had this idea but I'm not sure if it's okay. So just tell me what you think! If you want, you can even give me ideas or suggestions.

"Alright. Bye Mike, love you." Hanna said before smashing her lips to his and walking out the front door of the Montgomery household.

She hopped in her Mercedes and rolled down the driveway. On her way to Spencer's her phone made a ping.

"Hey Han. You're still going to Spencer's, right?" Aria texted.

"Yea. Where are you?" Hanna sent back.

Within twenty seconds Aria had texted back. "The mall. Meet you there?"

Hanna drove to Spencer's house and finally reached the Hastings home. She slammed the door shut after she grabbed her overnight bag. Hanna strolled up the stairs and knocked on the door. After a couple of pregnant moments, Hanna heard a few footsteps and the door swung open. "Hey," Spencer smiled.

"Hi. Can I come in?" Hanna asked. Spencer moved her left hand up and pointed inside the home.

"Okay, my parents won't be home till next Sunday. They have a business trip in New Jersey. Have you gotten ahold of Aria and Emily?" Spencer said.

"I didn't get a chance to contact Em, but Aria, I just texted and she should be on her way." Hanna mumbled while fidgeting with her keychain she got from Coach.

"Me and Toby were looking through some of Ian's old things and found a couple of things, here, let me show you." Spencer cried while pulling Hanna towards the living room.

When Hanna and Spencer walked in a card board box was on the coffee table. The room smelled of roses and stale whine, most likely from the kitchen. They sat on the tan couch and Spencer pulled the box near her lap. "I was looking through this and found Ian's old yearbook and a t-shirt. Once I show you it will make sense." Spencer said while rummaging through Ian's belongings.

She heaved out an old book and a t-shirt that said Nos Animaverto Totus. What the heck? Is that Latin? Hanna thought. "Garett, Jason, and Ian were in a club called N.A.T. And when I looked through the box, I found this t-shirt as well. Toby and I concluded that Nos Animaverto Totus means We See All." Spencer said while brushing a piece of hair behind her hair.

"Well. That's creepy…" Hanna murmured.

Just as Spencer lifted up the t-shirt with her pale hands, Aria walked through the door with a disturbed expression on her face. "Guys…. Something happened." Aria whispered.

Spencer and Hanna exchanged a weird look and they both got up. "What happened? Is someone hurt?" Spencer questioned.

Aria's eyes looked around the room. "It's….. Mike." Hanna's nose scrunched up and you can see a little wrinkle on her forehead.

"What!? Is he okay?" Hanna shrieked.

Spencer rested her hands on both, Aria's and Hanna's shoulders. "Hold on, Blondie. Aria, what happened to Mike?"

Aria looked at her brown boots from Steve Madden, and a single tear rolled down her cheek. Her big brown eyes glanced at Hanna and she saw a worried look on her face. "Um… He broke into someone's house. I mean, like he stole some stuff. I guess he's mad from my parents fighting all the time. A kid his age shouldn't be sitting back and slowly watch their parents drift apart from each other." Aria mumbled. She pulled up her sleeve to reveal a large bruise on her wrist.

"What the hell is that?" Hanna said with wide eyes. Spencer stared at the injury and immediately went to the freezer to get a pack of frozen peas.

Once Spencer returned with the frozen peas, Aria started up again, "I tried to talking to him. One thing lead to another, and I placed my hand on top of his to comfort him and the next thing I knew, I was against his bookshelves, my wrist throbbing." More and more tears gathered in Aria's eyes.

"When did this happen? Like, the bruise." Hanna asked. Aria sniffed, and a sob came out of her throat.

Aria brushed a piece of dark hair from her wet cheeks and tucked it behind her ear. "Well the break in happened Saturday. I talked to him before I left for Spencer's. The bruise like was there as soon as I walked down the stairs." She managed to get out in-between cries.

An angry look appeared on Hanna's face, "so, let me get this straight. My boyfriend kept this secret from me for almost six days?!"

Aria looked blankly at the ceiling and placed her purse on the kitchen counter and found a seat to sit on. "Well….. I'm sorry he didn't tell you, Han. I'm just really confused and upset and like just kind of angry."

"Okay. So my mom left money for dinner. Can we discuss this over some grilled cheese Panini's?" Spencer put on a smile and motioned towards the fifty dollar bill lying on the counter.

"Yea… Where's Emily?" Aria sniffed.

"Uh, I don't know. I'll call her." Spencer added. She took out her cell phone and quickly dialed her number. "Em?"

PHONE CALL:

"Yea?" Emily stated

"Are you almost here?" Spencer asked.

"I didn't even leave the house yet." Emily mentioned.

"Oh. Well-"Spencer was cut off when Emily decided to speak.
"Are you watching the news?" Emily asked.

"No, why? What's going on?" Spencer worriedly said while rushing towards the living room to turn on the television.

"They found more news on Tabitha's murder. There is supposed to be, like, a new case building up on it. Apparently, they found finger prints and her yellow sundress she wore the night she was murdered. It's only a matter of time before they match the fingerprints on her dress to us! And to make matters even worse, they found surveillance cameras from other hotels near the Cliffs!" Emily blurted.

"Shit." Spencer murmured. "Umm, let's not talk about this now…. Aria, Hanna and I were about to head over to the Grille, wanna meet us there?"

"Yea, see ya' then." Emily said.

PHONE CALL ENDED

"Alright we have a lot to talk about, let's go meet Em at the Grille." Spencer detailed.

All of the girls filed out of the ginormous house and loaded into Spencer's Prius.

The drive to the restaurant was dead silent. Once they reached their destination, Hanna, Spencer, and Aria walked into the coffee shop/ restaurant. Hanna spied Emily in a corner table and awkwardly waved to the girl who was sipping her drink.

"Hey Em. We need to talk." Aria spoke.

"Talk, because I also have something to talk about, too." Emily answered. All of the girls took a seat in the little chairs surrounding the table.

"So," Spencer began.

Hanna looked around her and saw the little clock on the other side of the place. There was also a little bell over the door that signaled there was someone exiting or entering the building.

"Mike is a criminal and didn't tell me about it!" Hanna uttered.

Spencer made a surrender motion and said, "Whoa Hanna, slow down. Emily doesn't have a clue of what you're talking about."

"Well…." Hanna tried to say.

"Mike broke into my neighbor's backyard….And he gave me this." Aria blabbed while showing Emily her deep purple bruise.

Hanna rolled her eyes and continued to speak, "And he didn't tell me! His girlfriend! BTW! Spence said you wanted to tell us something. Like important."

Emily shifted in her chair and put her hands up to rub her eyes. "I was just watching the news… They found new information on Tabitha's murder. The news also said that there was fingerprints and surveillance videos from other hotels near The Cliffs. Guys, I'm really scared. I don't want to go to prison. It's only a matter of time before they match our fingerprints to the fingerprints on her dress."

"Guys chill. It's okay! Everything will be okay. I know it! A will not ruin our lives, we will live on! Ali is just jealous of how fabulous we all are!" Hanna exclaimed.

A smile danced across everyone's faces, including Hanna. She wore a satisfied look on her face. "If we found out who Ali's freakin' helper was, we could like, figure out this whole case!" Aria sighed

The waitress came around refilling the water glasses as they continued to talk about who Helper A might be. "Hey, do you guys wanna head back to Spencer's? It's kind of late…" Aria asked.

Hanna, Spencer, and Emily glanced at the clock before grabbing their jackets and bags and heading towards the door. As soon as they walked out of the door, Aria's phone, then Spencer's, and then Emily's, and lastly Hanna's phone beeped.

Everyone stared blankly at their phones. Text from anonymous. It said.

You better stop digging, or maybe momma and papa Hastings won't be back from Jersey. See you at their funeral.

Kisses,

-A

"Fuck…." Hanna mumbled.

Emily, Spencer, Hanna, and Aria all piled into their cars and drove to Spencer's. "So, now what?" Spencer asked while shoving the key into the doorknob and walking into her house.

"I don't know." Emily whispered.

"It's not like we can't stop trying to find out who Helper A is, or where Ali is." Aria stated.

"I know… I just wish we could do something without A knowing about it. It's like she's everywhere!" Hanna cried whilst taking a seat on the tan couch.

"We should get some sleep. We have school tomorrow. And plus I have a swim meet. Are you guys coming?" Emily suggested while also plopping her bum on the sofa.

"Yea, you can bet on it!" Spencer smiled before slowly drifting off to sleep with her head hanging off her neck.

So WHAT DO YA THINK GUYS!? Should I continue? Do you like it? Do you not like it? TELL ME! BTW! There will be some couples in the story. This story is kind of flip flopped, I'm using the book and the TV series. It's cool. I know this is gonna be a long fan fiction. So yea that's about it!