Hey guys!I've been reading a lot of fanfiction that has to do with CSI and I'm inspired:)Hope you all enjoy!Not sure if this is a story though,so it might be a while before I update again.
~Jenny xoxo
Chapter 1
Loren's POV
I was getting ready for work,I had a new job in LA's crime detection agency.
I put my black leather jacket over my red blouse with ruffles,gray jeans,and black knee high boots.
I straightened my hair,grabbed my aviators and headed out the door with my cellphone in my backpocket.
I walked into the agency and was greeted by the CEO,Jake Madsen.
"Hello Loren,we're glad you're a new addition to the family."He said smiling.
"Thanks Mr Madson."
"Call me Jake,I'm not that old."
We chuckled."Let me introduce you to the rest of the team."
He led me into a room and there were six people sitting at a table.
But one guy caught my eye.
Eddie's POV
We were sitting in the break room discussing some things when Jake walked in with a beautiful girl.
"Hey everyone,this is is a new agent."
"Loren this is Tyler,Melissa,Ian,Aidrianna,Phil,and Eddie."
Everyone got up to greet her but I just stayed put and stared at her beauty.
Her brown hair fell perfectly,her hazel eyes sparkled,and her smile was blinding.
Her and Jake walked up to me."Eddie,this is Loren Tate."
I shook her hand and I never wanted to let go.
But,unfortunately,I had to.
"Okay,let's get started on our new case,shall we?"Jake said.
"This is the case of Chloe Carter,she was accused of killing her fiancé Cameron Miller."Jake said pulling out papers.
He set the papers down on the table."We need two people to go question Mrs Carter."
Everyone stayed silent.
"I'll do it."Loren said.
Everyone looked at her like she was crazy.
"What?"She said.
"Well,Chloe has been a suspect in other cases and she's very difficult to work with,plus she's down right crazy when she wants to be."Aid said.
"I see...so when do I get to meet the sweetheart?"Loren said.
"If you insist,Eddie you will go with her,is that a problem?"Jake asked me.
"No it's fine."I tried not to act so excited to work with her.
We said goodbye and headed to the car.
We were walking up to a blue and black Lamborghini.
"Um,Loren?We should get away from this car before we get in trouble."I chuckled.
She laughed."Yeah too bad we don't have the keys."
She turned around unlocked the door and got in the passenger seat.
She held the keys out the window."Wanna drive?"
I ran over and grabbed the keys and got in.
The inside the dashboard was sliver,the interior design was mostly midnight blue,and the leather seats were black.
"How did you get this car?"I said amazed.
"Nora Tate ring a bell?"She said smirking.
"Yeah,the famous singer from back in the 90's,she had a kid..oh."
"So you're Nora Tate's little girl."I said starting to drive.
"Yeah,but I'm not that little."She said pouting.
I laughed."So how come you didn't follow in her footsteps?"
"Well,I do sing but,I always wanted to catch criminals."
"I get it."We got to one of the police stations and they escorted us to Chloe's holding cell.
"Hello,Mrs Carter."I said.
We walked in the cell and Chloe was sitting on the bed.
"What do you guys want?"She said sitting up.
"We just came to ask you questions,do you want anything?"Loren said.
Why was Loren being nice to her?
"If you're trying to make me talk,there's nothing to talk about.I am innocent."
"Woah,calm down.I just asked if you wanted anything."
"I would really enjoy some sushi."She said sarcastically.
Loren walked over to me and handed me a twenty dollar bill.
"Go pick up some sushi please,I'll explain later."
I was confused but,I just nodded.
Twenty minutes later,I came back and Loren was sitting next to Chloe on her bed and they were talking.
I walked in and Loren walked up to me."Thanks Eddie."
She took the sushi out of my hands and gave it to Chloe.
"Thanks Lo."Chloe said.
Lo?They were friends?
"No problem,I'll be back tomorrow,we have to get back to work."She smiled and nodded as we left.
We got in the car and I questioned Loren.
"What was that about?"I said.
"Well,I want the suspects to trust me so,they can accept my help and give up."
"Hmm..smart."I said driving.
"Thanks and I recorded our conversation so I can look for clues."
"Good,now let's get back to the office."
When we got back,we explained what Loren did.
Loren's POV
"Good job Loren."Jake said.
"Yeah,you did better than I did on my first day."Phil said.
"What happened?"I said curiously.
"Well,he went undercover for a shop-lifting case but,his microphone was exposed."Adriana said laughing.
"What?I was wearing black clothes?"Phil said.
"Yeah and the microphone's wire was white."Ian said.
"Okay,well I recorded our conversation if you guys wanna hear."
They all nodded and I played it.
Loren:So,what happened between you and Cameron?
Chloe:Why should I tell you?
Loren:Because,I'm here to help you Chlo,tell me what went down.
Chloe:Nothing,I am innocent and he was a great boyfriend,I was shocked when he was killed.
Loren:What happened?Did you see who did it?
Chloe:Um..no and I don't think Cam had any enemies was a very like-able guy.
Loren:Well,I'm sorry for you loss.
Chloe:Thanks,but who was the guy you walked in with,do you like him?
I quickly shut off the recording.
"Hey we wanted to hear the rest!"Everyone whined.
"You guys didn't find any clues from that?"I said.
"Oh we did,we just wanted to know how you felt about Eddie."We all looked at him and he was smiling.
"Um,I found a couple things wrong with that conversation."I said changing the subject.
"Like what?"Jake said.
"Yeah,sounds like girl talk to me."Ian said.
"Yeah,but during the interview she kept touching her face and rubbing neck her also talked about Cam in past tense."I stated.
"Plus,she said I am innocent,instead of I'm and she answered a question I wasn't asking about."
Everyone looked at me shocked."Are you sure this is your first case?"Phil said.
"Yeah,it is.I mean anyone of you could of done this,right?"
"Maybe,but what about her quick subject change?Do you think that was suspicious or was it her female intuition."Ian said.
"It has to do with female intuition."Aid said.
"What do you mean?Because us men have no clue what's in the female mind."Phil said.
The girls chuckled.
"Well a girl changes a subject she's not comfortable talking about."
"Like Loren and her feelings towards me?"Eddie joked.
They all laughed except me and Eddie.
We were just smirking at each other.
"Okay,so what do we do next?"I said.
"You and Eddie have to keep visiting Chloe and try to get as much information as possible,Loren make sure you stay friendly towards her."
"Why?"I said.
"She's been questioned by everyone else here so she knows us,but she can trust you because she doesn't know what you're like."Tyler said.
I nodded.
"Melissa and Aidriana,you two need to search Chloe's apartment for clues."
"Tyler and Ian search Cameron's apartment."They nodded.
"Phil,you work on a suspect list.I know Chloe might be guilty,but we want to check everyone else too."
"You got it boss."
"Okay,that's it for 's go to lunch."
Eddie's POV
We all got up and left,but I forgot my cell phone in the screening room.
"Guys,be right back.I forgot my cell phone."
"Okay,hurry up though,you owe me lunch for letting you drive my sweet ride."Loren said.
"Can I drive it next?"Mel said.
"Shotgun!"Tyler,Ian,and Phil yelled.
We laughed and I left to the room.
I picked up my cell phone and it was next to Loren's cellphone.
I pressed play.
Chloe:Thanks,but who was the guys you walked in with,do you like him?
Loren:He's sweet but,I'm not sure how I feel about him yet.
Chloe:So that's a yes?
Loren:...
Chloe:You do like him!
Loren:I guess so..
Chloe:(started laughing)You guys are cute together and he likes you back.I can tell by the way he looks at you.
Tyler walked in behind me and listened.
Loren:Really?I don't know,I barely know him.
Chloe:Yeah, when Cam and I started dating we barely knew each other and instantly fell in love.
Loren:Yeah..
~~End of recording~~
"So you like her man?"Tyler said.
I turned around."What?"
"Cause,if you don't,I'll take a shot."He said smirking.
"She is off limits,plus she would never fall for you."
"We'll see about that."He started to walk out.
"Hey Lo!"He yelled from the door.
I grabbed my wallet and her cellphone and followed him.
"Yeah?"She said walking up.
"Loren!"I cut him off."Do you wanna go out sometime?"I said.
She was shocked but she was smiling."Sure."She winked and walked away.
I turned to Tyler and he was laughing.
"Don't do that again."I said.
"All I'm hearing is,thank you so much for getting me a date with the smoking hot Loren."
"I mean it Ty."
"Fine,but you better hold onto her,someone might steal her from right under your nose."He patted me on the back and left.
I was smiling because I had a date with Loren,but I was angry too.
Would Tyler actually steal one of his girlfriends again?
Hope you all liked it!Tell me what you guys think!Love you all!Much Lovee!
~Jenny xoxo