This is my first multi-chapter Twilight fanfic. I'm a little nervous finally putting it on the internet for others to read, but I figured, why else write it unless other people will read it? Constructive criticism is definitely welcome, but try not to be too harsh. :)
Generic disclaimer of course: All characters belong to Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement intended.
PROLOGUE
For the millionth time since that fateful day almost two months ago, I asked myself, "What had I done wrong?"
Did I commit some unforgivable crime in my past life that I was being punished for now? Just when I had finally gotten what I had wanted, prayed for, agonized over for years and years; just when all the pieces of my life were finally falling into place…
Implosion.
My entire world had collapsed in on itself.
I looked over at Edward, who was sitting at his kitchen table, playing War with his friend Jasper. I watched as he slapped down a ten and whooped, sliding both his and Jasper's cards into his own pile.
Jasper caught me watching them and gave me an apologetic smile.
I didn't know why they all kept apologizing to me. It wasn't their fault. Nobody could have expected what fate had in store for me.
Edward's gaze followed Jasper's and as soon as he made eye contact with me, his head dropped. He glanced up at me again and gave me a tentative smile, which I reluctantly returned.
Nobody, not Jasper, not Edward's parents, Carlisle and Emse, not his sister Alice or his brother Emmett could have expected nor prevented what God had in the works on that significant day eight weeks ago.
Who would have known Edward would completely forget me, his mind entirely cleaned free of every memory we had ever shared together since we were four years old?
He was the one person I could count on in my life; my best friend. The man I was desperately, painfully, completely head-over-heels in love with. The man who I had poured my heart out to on that day and finally, after years of waiting, had gotten the answer I had only dreamed of getting from him.
And he had no idea who I was.
So what does everyone think? Would you be interested in seeing where this goes? Please, review!! Me love you long time. :)