hey guys I'm back after taking a few tips from the one and only Lucia Hunter!
thanks for the tips you gave me and hopefully I've improved
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Eli sat at her desk thinking. She twirled her pen around in her mouth as she thought to herself. She hadn't been sleeping well lately and she's been getting stressed because she doesn't know why. I'm too tired, maybe I should ask Umi to leave so I could sleep...oh, I forgot she's here, though I don't want to sound rude...its just I'm sooo tired.
Just when her eyes were a about to close, a soothing voice brought her back to life. "ummm Eli are you alright? you look a little...distant" Umi said closing her book and walking over to the blonde.
"Oh sorry Umi, I was just thinking and I haven't had much sleep lately" the older girl said trying to brush off any worry that the other girl had with a smile.
"why don't you take a nap, I don't mind" the archer said with a small smile "plus I don't want you to force yourself to stay awake for me"
Hearing this made the blonde smile, her younger friend could be so sweet at times and her calming voice wasn't helping in any way, it was just so tempting to cuddle up to the archer, to have her strong comforting arms wrapped around her as she drifted of to dream land. Umi placed a hand on her friend's shoulder "you sure that's just it? you look a little pale. You sure your not ill" The archer asked.
Eli shook her head "nope just tired" the blonde gave a reassuring smile.
"is there something keeping you up?" the younger girl asked curiously. Although she knew her friend was tired, she didn't really want to leave her. that makes me sound really selfish that thought brought a small frown to her face. But still what if it's something bad bothering her!?. Okay now Umi was definitely curious.
Eli gave a little sigh. She got up off her chair and pulled her friend into a needed hug, resting her head onto the others shoulders. She buried her face into the blue locks, the scent of vanilla and strawberry filling her senses. She sighed in contentment and started feeling her eyelids droop as her tiredness started catching up. "Nope, nothing in general just cant sleep" she finally replied.
Umi gave a sigh of relief, smiling, she returned the hug. "well anyway I better get going, since I have...stuff to be doing and I want you to get some sleep" the archer said packing up her stuff and heading to the door. "I'll see you tomorrow Eli.
"Wait Umi!" the blonde quickly yelled before running up to the younger girl and placing a peck on the archers lips. She grinned at the others reaction "see you tomorrow"
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"Oh damn, damn, double damn! I'm late Minami-san is going to kill me. Why did I have to oversleep" Eli muttered to herself as she raced down the street, zig-zagging through crowds of people. She was about to make a sharp turn around the corner before, oooof!. She ran into something or someone, the blonde fell to the floor "ahh! I'm sorry are you alright...Eli?" the girls eyes snapped open and she looked up to see familiar amber eyes looking back at her.
"Umi!? what are you doing here? aren't you meant to be in school!" the blonde was shocked, since when did Umi sonada skip school? she was about to ask but decided against it, since it was Umi she knew it would be a good or serious reason for her not to be in school.
"The school is closed today for some reason, even the school council weren't allowed to know why" Umi said holding out a hand to help the other girl up. To which the other girl gratefully accepted and she brushed herself off. "that reminds me did you get a good sleep last night? you still look a little tired" the bluenette asked, she still looks really tired, maybe a day off school is what she needs.
"Really!? that's odd usually the council are the first to know, oh and yeah I'm fine really" the blonde said completely shocked and confused as to why the school was randomly closed for the day.
"I know...but still, I suppose we all need a day off now and then, sometimes the weekend goes so quickly" the archer said with a tired sigh for emphasis. The blonde couldn't argue with that, especially since it was so true. The weekend could go by in a flash.
"So you got any plans for today?" the blonde asked curiously.
The archer gave it some thought but to be honest she didn't really have any plans. All she was going to do was go home and figure it out from there. But now Eli's here that might not be the plan. "Well, all I was going to do was go home but..." the archer didn't know what to say.
"But?" the blonde asked.
The archer shook her head to clear all the confusing thoughts out her head. "It's nothing, I was just going to head home...unless you would like to do something?" the younger girl asked with a little hope in her voice. She really didn't fancy staying at home for the day and the other members of μ's had their own plans.
The blonde was stumped at the question. She had only found out about the information let alone thought about what she was going to do with it. "sure I would love to spend time with you Umi" the blond replied sweetly. The response made the archer blush from embarrassment. She wasn't expecting her answer to sound like that.
"W-well I-I guess w-we could. D-did you have anything in mind?" the archer asked trying to overcome her embarrassment. She took a deep breath to try to stop her burning cheeks.
Oblivious to the other girls internal battle. The blonde gave it some thought as to what she would like to do, but since her tiredness wouldn't allow her to do much, all she fancied doing was going home to rest, maybe watch a movie and have a sleep over. After all it was Saturday tomorrow, "would you like to come mine? we could watch movies and have a sleep over" the blonde asked trying to coax her growing excitement.
The archer smiled at the girls choice. So cliché of her. The bluenette chuckled at the thought. "sure! sounds like a nice idea" she answered "let me just tell my parents and we can head off".
"okay!" now the blonde definitely couldn't hide her excitement. Spending the night with Umi...just the two of us gahhh! I sound like a school girl gushing over a guy...well in this case girl. The thought brought a small blush to the older girls cheeks. After Umi sent the message the two girls started to make their way to Eli's home. The blonde couldn't help but link her arms through the younger girls, causing the archer to tense up and blush furiously, but she still kept a smile on her face, though it looked more like a goofy grin from the BANG! the girls screamed and jolted back as a crash of thunder erupted in the sky, followed by a white flash of lightning and then the very heavy rain.
The two started running, giggling like school girls as they rushed to the blondes home. Once they reached the front door Eli got out her keys and unlocked the door, soon after the two got inside they were completely drenched, but still giggling like idiot's "well I guess we don't need a shower for a while" the blonde said sweeping her soaked bangs out her eyes.
The archer chuckled "I guess so, though I never have liked cold showers" it wasn't long before the girls were back to giggling.
"c'mon you can borrow some of my pyjama's" the older girl said taking off her shoes and racing up the stairs, the bluenette did the same and followed the older girl. Once in the bedroom Eli grabbed a white shirt and light blue shorts and gave then to Umi to get changed in, before grabbing a baggy vest-shirt and orange shorts for herself. Now the pair were changed into drier clothes they made their way down stairs where Eli stuffed the wet clothes into the dryer and made her way into the living room.
"So anything in particular you would like to watch?" Eli asked making her way to the dvd wrack near the t.v. The archer sat next to her scanning the names of the movies, only one caught her eye though the name wasn't familiar to her so she knew she had never watched it, but she had heard Honoka talking about it once.
"This one looks good" the archer said pointing at the case.
Eli was completely shocked at her choice. Since when did Umi like this type of thing, seriously Chuckey! out of all things she could choose from she chose that one! "are you sure?" the blonde asked sceptically.
The archer nodded and the blonde couldn't help but grin. By the looks of it she hasn't watched it before. Well looks like I'm going to have a screaming Umi clutched to me all night the thought of it made her blush and she had to look away to hide it "well if you say so" she said before grabbing the case and placing the disc in the player.
After the two made their way to the couch, they both got comfortable and Eli grabbed a nearby blanket before placing it over the two. The blonde grabbed the remote and clicked a few buttons. Finally the film had started and the pair were staring intensely at the screen, though Eli's gaze couldn't help but fall to the girl next to her taking in every single detail of the archer, the way her breathing was at a calm, gentle pace and how her heartbeat was at a strong and comforting rhythm. Every time Eli was with the girl she felt at peace.
It wasn't long before another roar of thunder echoed through the sky, making both girls jump "well that was unexpected" said the archer shivering at the loud and scary noise. Eli couldn't help but chuckle and soon the pair were watching the film again...well one of them was half watching the film. As soon as Umi's eyes set back onto the t.v they widened immediately at the currant scene"GAH!" she yelled before burying her face into the blondes side, wrapping her arms around the others waist.
Eli didn't really expect the sudden action of the other girl, so ended up flinching a little. "It's alright" she said stroking the archers head.
The response she got was a small whimper, to which sounded adorable from Eli's point of view. She carried on running her hand over the girl's head in a comforting way, her fingers getting caught in the blue hair.
The archer simply tightened her grip around the blonde enjoying her head being stocked. It made her feel a little more safe. But it looks like luck wasn't on her side as another loud crash of thunder erupted throughout the sky followed by more rain.
When Eli opened her eyes again Umi was no longer sitting next to her, instead she was sitting on top of her, arms still wrapped around her waist. the new position made the blonde go beet red and her heart hammer against her chest. She was surprised to find the younger girl the same way. She could feel the younger girls heart against her chest and she bet the archer could feel the same thing with hers.
Umi gulped. She could feel butterflies flapping around in her stomach, her eyes were fixed to the blue ones of the girl below her. She had got the strange feeling of da ja vu that's right, our first kiss was similar to this and is if on cue, the archer found herself slowly moving forward. Eli was thinking the same thing and on instinct she slowly closed her eyes, waiting for the other's lips to be on hers once again.
She didn't have to wait long as Umi crashed her lips to the blondes, unlike before where it was slow and uncertain, this one was wild and passionate. Eli's arms locked themselves around her lovers waist as she moved her head to the side, to deepen their kiss, Umi's hands slowly made their way up to her lovers body, only to have them wrap around the blondes neck. Eli couldn't help herself any longer, she licked the archers bottom lip, to which she eagerly allowed access.
It wasn't long before the to were fighting for dominance and the kiss was getting heated two girls were clawing and scratching at each others cloths, like it would somehow get them to vanish on their own. Finally the two parted, a thin layer of saliva connected the two. The pair were now panting heavily, trying to catch their breath. "why...don't...we...take...this...upstairs?" the blonde said between breaths.
The archer simply nodded not trusting her voice. The mature and noble girl's mind had been over powered by lust and the need for the other girl right now!.
As soon as the girl had responded the two raced up stairs to Eli's room. Look's like the blonde wasn't going to get her sleep any time soon.
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