AN: What's up, dudes and dudettes?! I don't normally use that kind of slang, but for whoever hasn't noticed, it's been a year since I joined! YESH. LOTS OF YESHES. AND MANY MORE YESHESHESHES.
Pure torture. Pure, freakin' torture. That was the only words to describe what happened.
lets flashback, shall we?
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"Again, with the butt! These mosquitoes are out of control!" Humphrey said as his vision went blurry. He saw a few weird things before he flopped on the ground and passed out.
8 hours later.
Humphrey was awoken to loud rumbling. He slowly opened his eyes to see a small grate in whatever he was in. The car, or what he thought was carrying the cage, ran over a speed bump at full speed, and Humphrey's cage flew off the car. A splash was heard, and the cage must have been sealed really tight, because the only water leaking in was through the grate, but it was coming in fast. Humphrey held his breath. He was able to hold it in for awhile before it all suddenly disappeared. He screamed for help, but mud started flooding in, and he passed out.
the next thing he remembered, he was waking up inside the cage, but the cage was in a calm, very smallish stream. It was just wide enough for a two yard log to fit long ways inside. The cage was partly buried in the mud in the bottom of the mud in the bottom of the stream. Humphrey shook his head, took a deep breath, and then used his two front legs to shove the sides of the cage. After about five seconds, Humphrey shoved a little harder and the cage, and it exploded. Humphrey climbed out of the stream and shook his fur off, right as he saw a goose and a duck, right down the stream, hitting rocks with sticks. Humphrey made his way over to them with a slight limp where the cage fell off the truck. When they saw him, they flipped out and tried to fly, but Humphrey grabbed the gooses legs.
One long and painful ride later.
"Ida-who?" "Idaho! Home to mountains, rivers, lakes, and a few... Billion potatoes." The goose said. Humphrey stood with a dumb look. "Why did they take me?" He asked. "Normally, you would have been brought with another wolf, but you seem to have come alone." "I might have been with another wolf, but I was stuck in that cage when it flew in the river." Humphrey said. "We know where a den is, if you need one." The duck said. "Thanks, but I need to go find whoever that wolf was, I can't leave someone behind. Omega's honor." Humphrey said before thanking them and running off.
about an hour later.
Humphrey came upon a camp. He saw a few large cages with wolves, barking like crazy. Humphrey snuck up to the cages, unlocked them, and watched as all he wolves scattered, except for one, who looked almost exactly like himself. Something in Humphrey's mind clicked when he saw it, but then he heard a gun being loaded. Humphrey turned towards the Hunter. He started growling, before a loud bang was heard and he went blank.
the next day.
Humphrey awoke to the sound of flesh tearing. He looked to the side. The wolf from the hunter camp was eating a caribou. Humphrey stood and asked "Who are you?". The wolf didn't answer. "I don't like repeating myself. What is your name?". The wolf sighed. "You don't remember me?" "I don't even know what pack you came from." "I'm your sister, from the north."
AN: This chapter is pretty short, but it will definitely become better, I hope. Now compare this to my older version, (Which I never completed) and see which is better.