Just another Day
Hello, this is my second fanfic that I have written so far. I would like people's advice on what I should improve on as I go on. I would like your constructive criticism, thank you. Since this is my second fanfic that I have written about I would like to know where I am at with my writing.
Also: I do not own Avatar: The Legend of Korra or The Last Airbender
It was just another day for the people of New York City in 1936.
Many people were walking to their various places, people were dancing, having a good time, and all of a sudden POOF! Gone the city gone! Everyone, the buildings, the cars, everything was gone. Not a flash of light or anything. Only a poof and that was it. Many people across the harbor in New Jersey saw the disappearance of their neighboring cities vanished and wondered what has happened. Many newspaper headlines were made titling "Where is the big apple?" But none knew what happened to it. In just a few hours later another poof and a new city emerged from the cloud. The new city was unfamiliar to everyone in that area. The buildings, the people, the cars, everything was unfamiliar. The biggest change was their so called Statue of Liberty which was not a statue at all. In fact it was a statue of a giant green monk with a staff in his hand looking over the city instead of the other direction towards the ocean. People wondered in awe what this new city could be or what new things could happen. As people started to look and walk into the city the design was clearly of Eastern influence. There was a sign that people thought was written in Chinese. As people tried to translate it (and someone did) they read that the sign said "Welcome to Republic City."