OK Everyone, here is my new story. Hope you like it. Please give some feedback and review. I would like some help or ideas. thanks very much.
It'll make more sense in the next chapter! But please stick with it!
thanks
Life is strange. We all live like there is something to keep us going, a sense of purpose. We all think life is mapped out the way we want it to be and we will work it out somehow. However, life plays tricks on us. Some call it fate, others call it destiny, and some people call it a mistake. You take a wrong turning, you miss a certain bus, you say the wrong thing at the wrong time and BAM… you've just created an alternate timeline. How could things have been different? You could stop something, or meet someone, or find something. Sometimes in life, there are things that aren't meant to happen, or so we think. It's all about making decisions and how you deal with the consequences.
He was ready for her. She was coming to the station and he was ready. He knew what he wanted to say, and what he wanted to happen. He needed her, and he wanted everything to be ok. Her dad needed to get better, then they needed to sort themselves out. Try to make something work, coz god knew how much he loved Kerry young.
He was ready for her. She was coming back to the station and he was ready. He was on the building, in position. Ready to fire. For what she had done to him. She knew too many things and there was always the possibility that she would say something. He had to stop her. who knows, maybe if she didn't know, there might have been a future for them. She was a good looking girl, no doubt about it. But this was what was happening now, and he needed to be focused. God, he hated Kerry Young.
Please review!
thanks very much!