I KNOW I do a lot of these stories, and don't continue them but I just love where this is going and hey, its my profile, but this idea is so different I love it! And I am not copying anyone else's idea's this might sound a little similar to the lovely bones at first but it will change *If I decide to continue it* PLEASE read and tell me if I should make more to this, I really do like where it is going :)
Alli said I needed to try something new, a short skirt and a halter top, it was my seventeenth birthday so I said what the hell.
Alli did my make-up hair; she even picked out my accessories. I looked hot. Well at least I thought I did, I was finally coming out of my shell, the shell I had been trapped in for much too long. We were ready to go, Alli and I were going to meet Fiona and Adam at a restaurant, and Eli and Drew said they would join later. So we started to walk down the main streets of Toronto, the lights were outstanding, Alli insisted we take pictures together outside of the café for facer-range, but then when she couldn't upload them because of the lack of wireless internet she went into the café to get a signal and use the washroom, I said I would stay outside, to have a minute to myself. Little did I know these would be my last minutes.
I heard a guy, sounding drunk, cursing at the air. I squinted my eyes because of the darkness and he got closer to me, the closer he got I could hear him scream more, it sounded as if he was yelling at me. I looked through the café windows, Alli had just went into the washroom, but knowing her it could be a while till she came out. I lingered towards the door, but I dropped my cell phone in the process, I couldn't hear the guy anymore so when I looked for him I sighed in relief when I didn't see him around the corner like before, he must have taken off the other way. I bent over and grabbed my phone, picking it up from the ground, right before I could get a grip on it; it vibrated sending it a foot in the other direction that was slightly down hill. I quickly saw the text message that Eli had sent
You're not going to ditch me tonight right? ;)
rolled my eyes and grabbed my phone, but before I could stand straight up I felt two hands gripped around my waist.
"Elena, I told you that you'd regret leaving me, now you must pay bitch" I heard a raspy voice say. My name wasn't Elena, it was Clare. I realized it was the same guy before that I'd thought went the other direction; he must have hidden in the alley. Before I could scream he covered my mouth and took out a pocket knife.
He threw me into the alley far enough where I could barely see the entrance, tears where burning my eyes when I silently prayed to god to forgive me for any sins I had committed, I suddenly regret everything I had ever done, telling off Jenna, getting matching piercings with Eli, disrespecting my parents when they went through their divorce, throwing myself at Eli when I was at my lowest point, I regretted everything. I wish I hadn't lost my nickname 'Saint Clare'.
He pushed me into the wall so hard my head cracked on the wall sending bolts of pain in every direction down my body; in the distance I could hear Alli saying my name repetitively. I cried harder and screamed I'm not Elena million of times, but he kept saying I was a lying whore. He lowered the blade to my neck and made a cut about an inch thick, I he cut into my windpipe so I could no longer scream, he slit my neck far enough to kill me, I was actually thankful I didn't half to indulge the suffering when he repetitively stabbed me in the stomach, chest and lower back. This was the beginning of the end, I was now about to find out what happens after you die, if my parents were right about our beliefs and heaven, or if I was to suffer through pain and angst until somebody disposed of my lifeless body.
More or not? You pick, and some how Clare wont be alone, but not with Eli, or any romantic interest :) Please tell me why you think :) *BTW I love lengthy comments :)*