Hi all you Twilight fans, I have recently discovered the site and LOVE it!! I have decided to contribute and write a story myself. This is my first story, so I hope you like it! I would appreciate reviews to know what all of you like in a story!! I'll shut up now and get to the story!!
BPOV
"Oh my god Edward!! This is beautiful, but you really shouldn't have gotten me anything!"
I still don't get why Edward insists on buying me presents. Most people would love the thought of having a drop dead gorgeous boyfriend who has an endless bank account. I just wish he put that money to good use, which does not include me.
"Love, it's your birthday. We have to celebrate."
"No Edward. We do NOT have ANYTHING to celebrate since I am just becoming older and older than you. I don't want to throw off our balance anymore than it already is!"
"Well, let me indulge in the wrong for one night, and let me surprise you one last time'
He had to use my weakness to his advantage. He stepped close enough to me that I could taste his breath on my tongue and dazzled me with his perfect eyes. I knew the 'last time' part was just to get me to agree, but still, I couldn't resist his offer. How horrible could it be spending a night alone out on the town with Edward? Any normal girl in the world wouldn't have had to think this much to come up with their answer.
I let out an exasperated breath as he smiled my favorite smile.
"OK Edward," I said, putting on an annoyed look, "just this one time though. Then it never happens again. Agreed?"
Of course, he knew me too well. Hew saw right through me. He pulled me into his arms and kissed me so passionately I thought I was going to pass out. Then when he pulled back from my mouth slightly, he said my name in the sexiest voice any man has ever had. He flashed me his perfect white teeth in his gorgeous grin. He knew he had won.
"Come on my Bella. Off to dinner."
With that he grabbed my hand and pulled me into the Cullen's driveway where he then buckled me into his Volvo.
I was not surprised when we pulled into the Italian restaurant where our first "date", I guess you could call it, was. There was a difference this time, though. I actually paid more attention to the menu. I knew what I was ordering. I got the goat cheese and basil chicken. After our server finally stopped attempting to flirt with Edward, she decided to take my order. It seemed like forever before we had time to talk alone again.
"So, I'm assuming this is it right?" I asked Edward. I shouldn't have bothered. I knew Edward wasn't going to be this reasonable. His look said it all. He raised one eyebrow and let out a chuckle.
"I do apologize Edward. I'm being very silly." I commented, adding a bit of sarcasm in while I rolled my eyes. Then Edward reached over and stroked they stray pieces of hair off my face. I could feel my face growing red hot due to his touch. His icy skin made my blush feel ten times worse.
Then, he truly surprised me. He started placing light kisses on my lips and then they grew more and more passionate. Eventually, he pulled me over the table into his arms. In the process, he knocked over my glass of water. Until he looked down again, he did not realize that the water spilled all down the front of my shirt. I started blushing massively when I discovered that you could see all of my magenta bra right through my white shirt.
"Don't worry, love," Edward said with a grin, "I like your shirt like that better anyways."
I think my blush deepened about fifteen shades after he said that. In response he pulled my neck to his face and began kissing up and down my neck. Once his comment processed, I giggled.
"You're kidding right?" I questioned. I knew he must be joking since he was always such a gentleman. He must just be playing with me.
I was surprised when he met my gaze.
"No, Bella. I am very serious. You are the most attractive woman I have ever seen in my life, and that lingerie makes it so hard for me to keep my self control.
I pondered the thought. I never really have thought very highly of my self. I mean, I am a clumsy mess who never really fits in with anyone. At least, here in Washington, pretty much everyone is just as pale as me. Especially after dating a Cullen, I have a better appreciate for pale. It was touching to know that Edward really did think I was that attractive.
"Well, if you ever want to let it go, just let me know."
"Oh, trust me. I definitely will. I definitely will."
I smiled at the thought. But the wonderful moment was ruined by the server. She cleared her throat and exasperatedly explained that our food was ready. I was so embarrassed that the server had let alone seen me straddling Edward, but straddling Edward with a transparent shirt on. Staying true to my self, I tripped on my back to my side of the table on some ice that was left on the ground. Just to make my birthday dinner even more humiliating, the server dropped the tray of pasta and chicken all over my head. I began sobbing and ran into the bathroom. As I passed the other tables in the restaurant, I got looks of concern as well as looks of shock. There was a baseball team who whistled as I passed. I quickly threw my hands around my chest. There were only two people that giggled as I passed, and luckily, they were probably one or two.
I threw open the women's room door.
Oh my god. My day couldn't get any better.
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