My peter Pan Story
Main characters:
Danielle –Dani/Dee- (15 years old)
Jake (16 years old)
William –Will- (16 years old)
Helen (16 years old)
Michelle –Elle- (15 years old)
Story Line
Dani is the youngest girl in year 11, and has always liked being the youngest, but her parents have always wanted her to just grow up, and there was a time when she didn't care, but now she's starting to feel as if her childhood is slipping through her fingers and she wants to find a way to bring it back.
Jake is a 16 year old boy, who ran away from home a year ago and now lives in a small village by the sea in Panama City (Florida), he met Dani at his new school, Hill mount, and soon he has a proposition for her.
Dani had always thought that Peter Pan was just a made up story, a boy who could fly, with a little help from pixie dust, and who never had to grow up. So when she met Jake and he told her that he could take her to never land, she laughed at the idea, until she realized something that she never in her wildest dreams thought that could come through.
Chapter 1
Clear Blue Water
"I thought that it was a great choice." Elle told me, as watched the credits roll at the end of the film.
"It had a bit of everything in it." Helen nodded, and pointed to the TV screen, "Though did you notice that Captain Hook, and Wendy's dad looked very a like?"
I looked at where she was pointing and saw that they were both played by the same actor, and laughed, I hadn't actually noticed that.
"Whatever, it was cool, much better than the Disney classic Peter Pan." I added, and that was true.
Whenever I watched the Disney Classic, I used to think that there was just one element missing from it, and I had finally realized what it was. It was the realism, the real film was much more realistic, and not only because it wasn't a cartoon, but it had a much more realistic element to it.
"Should we watch something else?" Elle asked; she reached for the DVD collection, "How about we watch a scary film?"
"How about we go to sleep?" I protested, "I don't feel like watching another film."
"Sounds good to me." Helen nodded, just as Will came into the room.
"No," He insisted, "Yesterday was the last day of school and we have to spend our summer holidays doing something fun, and if you haven't noticed, it's only 1pm, and we are not going to nap!"
I laughed, "Nap, sounds demented, more like beauty sleep."
"For a short period of time," Will said, "Which means nap time."
Elle jumped to her feet and pulled the curtain to revile way to much sun in the room and made me slouch back and moan.
"You are unbelievable Danielle!" Elle cried, "How can you be tired at this time of day?"
"What are you a vampire?" Will asked amused.
"Something like that." I nodded, "Anyways, it's boiling outside, and there's nothing to do!"
"Come on Dani," Helen sighed, "You won't win this one, if it's too hot we'll go to the beach."
"Fine!" I cried out defeated, "We'll go to the beach, and spend our summer holidays actually boiling to death in the heat, but if I die, you will have a lot of explaining to do to my parents!"
I know it's short, but that's because it was connected with chapter 2, and because that made it way too long, I split them in too. Please review, and I'll be adding more chapters soon, if you like it! Thanks.