Title: Moments that aren't supposed to.

Author: Enorm

Disclaimer: I don't own anyone or anything

Pairing: Elizabeht/John

A/N: Hi! This is my first atlantis fic. I have made an altenate version of The Eye. I have not seen this episode yet, so this story can be very different. I only used the part that Kolya uses Elizabeth as a hostage. I don't know where Carson is in The Eye, but in my story he is just in his place.

Sorry for grammar mistakes, English isn't my native tongue.

God. Stand STILL!

He was getting really frustrated now. Just when he wanted to pull the trigger, Kolya swirled her elsewhere making it impossible for him to fire. She looked terrified, she knew what he had to do. But still she was terrified.

You've got to hurry now… They are almost at the gate!

Think !

Think!

Shit!

Kolya almost approached the gate. He had to fire. NOW!
John pulled the trigger and the bullet made his way ans went through Kolya.. but no, he had also hit Elizabeth. Kolya was the first who sunked to the ground. The bullet went straight to his heart and was dead immediately. But Elizabeth on the other hand, was hit somewhere else in her body. She just stood there, mouth open, staring at John. Then, she stared down, her mouth still open, to the wound as her hands covered it. She felt immense pain going through her body and she fell on top of the already dead Kolya.

NOOOOOOOOOOOO this CANNOT be happening!

John panicked and rushed to Elizabeth. He frantically tried to press her wounds, but failed and her blood escaped her body rapidly. He cried out for Carson.

Elizabeth whimpered in pain as John pressed at her wound. She let out a cry and her tears started to fall down and mingled with her blood. She saw John in a blur, he was trying to say something. But the pain was just too much to hear him. She let out another cry, her arms trying to get a hold on something, or rather someone. John hugged her and whispered something in her ear

"Elizabeth! Please, say something"

She tried to answer. She saw tears glistering in John's eyes

"John, it's …." Pain.. pain everywere ".. okay, you did what you had to do"

"No Liz, don't you dare. You can't leave me alone. LIZ!"

"John, you must know that … I love you….

I always did"

" I know Liz, I know. And you know what's funny? I love you to, from the very first beginning that I saw you"

Elizabeth tried to smile, with succes. The pain was slowly fading away and she knew that was a bad sign, she was dying. She didn't have the strength to panic anymore. But accepting death? No, that was just not possible.

"John, I don't … want to die"

"Ohh, but you're not going to. I won't let you."

Elizabeth smiled again, she truly regretted things didn't got a chance to work out. Without a warning, John slid his hands behind her neck and kissed her tender. But before Elizabeth could kiss back, she lost her consiousness. John felt her going limp and got angry. He sobbed and screamed

"WERE THE HELL IS CARSON!"

Rodney stood behind him and tried to calm him. He saw an incredibly desperate and unhappy John in front of him. He knew he was font of Elizabeth, but wouldn't have guessed he actually loved her. John screamed in frustration and punched Rodney. Realising what he just did, he started crying even harder. Rodney just hugged him, not exactly knowing what to do.

Suddenly Carson and his team arrived and yelled everyone to back off. He checked if Elizabeth was still alive and then rushed off to the infirmary trying to save her live.

Alright, this is the beginning, I hope you liked it. Should I continue ? Flame if you want.