Before we start with this craziness, here is an introduction and warning chapter.
For your pleasure and our sanity, we are using, with his permission, an edited version of My Immortal, edited by Evilkritter of Youtube. I highly suggest reading his story, My Immortal Refined, which is one of my favorite commentaries out there.
Unlike a lot of commentaries out there, this one will have three commentators: Penny, Larka, and Luke. For your viewing pleasure, we have decided to introduce ourselves.
Penny: If anyone cares to know, my profile on here is Penny Stubbs. There is a link on this profile to my single one. I will be your go-to girl for references Tara made without explaining, to hopefully save you guys from constant trips to Google. I'll also be explaining words that aren't exactly right. Those words that Tara misspelled, accidentally making another more hilarious word. I'm also the one that takes the mess that this story is on our Google Docs account and make it look nice and readable. I am one of those people that love My Immortal. I find it hilarious and take it light-heartedly most of the time. So don't expect any flaming of Tara Gilesbie from me. I'm glad she wrote this story of pure awesomeness.
Luke: I am a huge nerd, and proud of it. I'll make nerdy references, try to explain them, and hope someone else gets them. Unlike Penny, I may make the occasional flame at Tara, or just point out stupidity. I have a solo Fanfiction account, but I haven't used it in a long time, and it was full of fails, and thus, will not be mentioned. I am the sole male of the group. I read much more than I write, but in the event I ever get around to it, I have a couple of stories I'd like to fix up and get on Fictionpress. Also memes, many, many memes.
Larka: I tend to be very critical of writing styles. I don't believe in full out flaming, but I might do some accidental minor flaming. I also tend to make random little comments and many, many Star Wars references. My account on here is under the name Larka Rinna Luna, in case you cared. Not that you actually do. Just so you know, we completely relied on text messages and our chats here on Google Docs. I'm actually a city away from Penny and I don't know where Luke lives. Granted, the cities are about twenty minutes from each other and I'm not sure my dinky little town counts as a city, but hey, whatever.
We were never together while writing this story, at least not so far.
A warning from Larka: This story will give you severe headaches while melting your brain matter at the same time if you do not take frequent breaks. That's what I told my brother. I'm not sure he listened.
Penny: and with all this in mind, hit that special button and move on to chapter one.
